Very cute.

my heart is about to melt this was adorable

That was absolutely lovely. Pulled at my heartstrings and made me sigh like a love struck school girl. Wonderful work :)

This is one of my favorite writing styles, it's vague but that only serves in making it mysterious and emotionally effective. Lines like this one; ’They would both burst into flame, and he would feel nothing except for how brightly she burned.’ always leave me captivated in ways that more complex emotional explanations never manage.

this was insanely intense & i am so very, very dead. my ship. that was so perfectly done, so perfectly written i just cannot deal, holy.

The whole time I was reading this I kept thinking, "please let them kiss or something! At least just have a little thing in there! " And I got my wish, thank you.

awwwww...Finally he got the courage and kiss her! nicely written!

Whoops looks like a lot of people favorited without reviewing \_(ツ)_/

What? she didnt seem surprised. So they already told each other what they felt and all his thought was because he was so deperate to kiss her?
Hahahaha... you surprised me ! I was expected some death sentence and here you were gave me a 'you okay?' sentence...hahah :D
Nice, thank you for good read and see ya :)

Beautifully written! I loved the way you portrayed the complexities of their relationship. I wish the actual chapter had turned out like the way you wrote it ;D

This was AMAZING.
Such a great work!

D'aww!

Sooo sweet;)

Sweet! :)

Wow. Beautifully written, a one-shot piece yet the concept is amazing, it's like I read a chapter story. Only them could understand what each other feels without saying a word, very heart warming indeed.

You gotta read this people, trully a work of art!