I can say this much, those other stories must have been over the moon to yours... I totally love the way you write! I get so lost in your stories as I read, it almost as though they were not even o/s at all. Very all encompassing as they are and I love that I cannot seem to put it down until I finished reading them. Woo I so saw the nose bleed tyler got, lol... I love the progress as she learned to be herself and rediscovered who she was. I loved that her art worked for her in so many ways. As a living, as art for Rose and how Edward begged her for the one and made her sign it...
You do not say how many kids they have but it sounds like they had quite a brood.
Great Story and Great Writing! KimiD

I loved reading your story.

I loved it,

I have you on author alert because I really love your other story, "She Waited For Me." Therefore, when my email sent me an alert that you had written another story, I was sooo excited! Very cute storyline and a beautiful couple...I cannot wait to read more from you! Please write more soon! :)

I really enjoy reading this story. It was one of my favorites in the whole contest. Can't wait to read more from you.

Really good story but it kept switching from past to present tense which gets a little confusing.

awesome story i loved it...write more

Hey Ana! If you want me to write out your full name I will be here forever! As I say on my profile I am a reader not a writer! Lol so my spelling is bad! Anyway thanks for the review back :) I can't understand why you came in 10 equal I really enjoyed reading this story :) And I loved how you carried it on until they were older! Sometimes you are left just wondering! Also congratulations on writing a really good story :) I have been on FF for a while and I have read ALOT of Twilight stories and I thought you did really really well! It was a pleasure to read you story and I hope I am first to reveiw on here too! I am looking forward to reading you other story you have on here too! Have a wonderful day :) Chilly x