| Reviews for What a Mess! |
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   Trc8420 chapter 15 . 6/20 Great story! Please update soon |
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/19 Please update! I love this story! |
| Kemq chapter 15 . 2/20 Great story. |
| B34chGr1 chapter 1 . 2/7 sad to see this didn't get the get the full story it deserves. it's really good. |
| Should'veBeenAWeasley chapter 9 . 8/7/2019 Not gonna lie, this chapter cracked me up a little bit! |
| momma2fan chapter 15 . 7/7/2019 What a mess! Lol...this is a great story. I hope you plan to finish it! |
| Fastace2429 chapter 15 . 5/16/2019 Please tell me that thay don't get busted! ! is embrey going to be ok . Please update soon! This is a really good story! |
| rachel625 chapter 15 . 3/19/2019 This has been so good! Any chance of you continuing this story? I would love to read more! |
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/1/2018 Super sad this story isn't finished :( |
| Whitlock21 chapter 1 . 8/31/2018 Paul's last name is Lahote |
| Claire chapter 9 . 8/22/2018 I want to see it, it sounds interesting... |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/24/2018 This story has potential. However, I do have to say that, the pace of the story moves to quickly in certain areas. For example, at one moment Bella is completely disgusted with Paul's past that she wouldn't ever go out with him (despite being attracted to him). Than like 5 minutes later she tells Leah that she wants to go out with Paul. I'm sorry, but in reality (bond or no bond) that wouldn't fucking happen. That would take weeks or even months, because Paul would have to prove to Bella that his man whore ways were done. Yet, in the story he doesn't even prove it or show her. It just goes to them having a heavy make out session in his bedroom. Just hours after imprinting and Bella saying that she didn't want to be with him because of his past. Not realistic at all. |
| tinkermist99 chapter 15 . 5/13/2018 plz update |
| ABC chapter 4 . 4/26/2018 In chapter 4, I honestly want Rosalie to find out about what Edward was doing. I want to see her like Bella and lash out (or burn) on Edward. |
| marysix chapter 15 . 10/1/2017 Yowza! I think Embry and Jess could be really cute together. Would love more of this story! |
