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Writtenaspr chapter 16 . 5/29 Hello, this is a gorgeous story, and I am truly enjoying it, but , what is this silence from you again? Dude, I'm reviewing and you are not writing? Please stay safe and happy and engaged in fruitful crafts in the middle of Lockdown; incompetence , stubborn blindness and the slow overturn of a democracy into a horrible one-man tyranny, that allows no protest, no humor, no wisdom and no medicine. we are living through it now, and I am so scared. Not film, real life. We need fanfiction to keep up hope in the middle of a new loss of our freedom. What would Snape do ? |
Noah flintlock chapter 16 . 5/15 Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow THAT AS GREAT! |
Ciara Tallio chapter 11 . 5/15 Please keep writing I just love all the things you write about! I love drama like that by the way! Keep up the great work Your greatest fan Ciara. T |
AngelMoon Girl chapter 16 . 3/30 D’aw. The Harry and Lupin bonding was very sweet. I love that you have the Golden Trio figuring out Lupin’s secret early on. Helps move that side story along, presuming you intend on following through with the entirety of PoA. My BIGGEST excitement is Snape’s suspicions about Harry’s home life. Ooh, it’s killing me. The slow burn of it all :) In the best way, mind you! You’re very very good at progressing everything very naturally. Please please come back to this story! Hoping you are safe and well during this Coronavirus scare, too. |
AngelMoon Girl chapter 15 . 3/30 EEK! It’s happening! Snape is connecting the dots! This is so exciting. It’s a tragedy there’s only one chapter left. I do SO hope you’ll come back and finish this masterpiece. You are knocking Occlumency out of the park. I’m dying to know how the story ends! |
AngelMoon Girl chapter 13 . 3/30 Ooh! I love that you are introducing Occlumency this early on! But it’s a viable solution... and even more intriguing... Snape will start to uncover the horrors of Harry’s past. Bring on the angst! :) |
AngelMoon Girl chapter 12 . 3/30 Yay fluff! *is most satisfied* I thoroughly enjoyed this glimpse at haggard Snape pushing himself to his limits to create an antidote. I’m glad Harry is out of the water! That ending with his near breakdown was fantastic! |
AngelMoon Girl chapter 11 . 3/30 YES! I loved the drama of Harry’s poisoning; what fun to see Snape in a full blown panic like that :) Thank goodness he and Pomfrey are on the case! Great job! |
AngelMoon Girl chapter 10 . 3/30 Ooh Harry is mixing sleeping potions... this is going to end badly! I am really loving your story so far :) Been binging it! I see it’s not finished yet and that you haven’t updated since 2017. I hope you’ll continue at some point. I know how easily years can slip away from you but you have such TALENT it would be a shame not to give this a proper ending. You write Harry and Snape so very well and have me on the edge of my seat wondering when Snape will discover Harry’s past. I’m loving the slow way in which you’ve brought them closer. I can’t wait too to see how the lessons progress. Wonder what Snape will think when he sees Harry’s actual Patronus! |
grace chapter 16 . 3/30 hello! I know I'm late but... I really enjoyed your stories! You haven't been updating this story in a while, so I was hoping if you could start working on this again? Pleaseeee... I would really appreciate it! AHHH thanksss! |
unknown chapter 16 . 3/29 omg, thank you so much for writing these! I really enjoy them and I read them when I have nothing to do. So entertaining! Snape had always been my favorite character and seeing him start to care about harry makes me so happy lol! Please continue to update! I really enjoy it hehehe! Thanks so much! I'll be looking forward for your next update! |
Bookworm1107 chapter 16 . 3/23 Awesome! |
Pretzel chapter 16 . 1/15 Your story is so so so so so gooood! Please update sooon! I'm begging youuu T_T. I-We are allll want to know what will happen nextt!️ |
May chapter 8 . 1/1 Ooooh what will happen to Harry? Has Snape developed a heart? |
NarutoLover777 chapter 16 . 12/13/2019 I love this story more than should be allowed. I've read some that touch on the topic of Snape seeing Harry's memories of abuse but they're usually real cringy and out of character. I love this soooo much and you're writing style is great and I love how Snape slooowllyyyy warms up to Harry and how realistic it is. If you keep writing, there'd be a lot of people here to like it. And if not, thanks anyways cause this was still an awesome story to read. |