This is absolutely beautiful I actually started crying

Wow. This is just. Wow. Why? Why would you do this to me?! I started reading this and I thought it was going to be another cliched delena fic but you totally turned it around. Especially the second chapter. *stands up and applauds* cheers.

I need a second before the friggin chest pains consume me.

so beautiful...
it made me cry...

This was...excruciating. And I had been listening to Yiruma's river flows in youalong in the background... And I just kept crying. Tears running down my face literally. But it was also amazing. You have such a way with words.

just found this and so many tears!

beautiful

That is the saddest story I have ever read. Great job though :) I think im just going to go die now :'(

So I can not stop crying, part of me is mad but then again we all know he would die without her. Great job, amazing work.

this story is such a masterpiece..it made me cry so hard, it has been minutes until i stopped crying..you made this story sooooo beautiful and no one can write it like you do, i'm really attach in to this, but its just so depressing because of the tragic ending, also with this short story you managed to show how irrevocably in love they are to each other..

Wow. Absolutely amazing! I noticed that you posted this story a while ago (I know, how could I not have read it till now) and sometimes when I read a story I like, and want to go back and read it a few months later, the author deleted it:( please keep this on, it's truly amazing :D

You made my bawl my eyes out. Great writting. Extremely emotional stuff. My chest ache. And i will never see Hide and Seek the same way ever again.

Oh MY FUCKEN GOD! I don't think ANY story has ever made me cry THIS much. And I mean, I've read some sad stuff, but this was borderline heart wrenching! "I" wanted to die, shit. At the end I couldn't stop crying and 20 minutes later, I'm BARELY well enough to review. This was just SO SO SAD! It hurt... it still hurts.

It was some fantastic writting, but SO depressing! I need me a romatic comedy to get me out of this funk.

Love this story, you did a great job:) I don't come across much fanfictions like this often. I'd like to read more like this.

I dont think I've ever gotten teary in a fanfic until now. Was emotional that's for sure. :'(

You have an excellent knack for writing.