A second chapter would be great T.T
I've seen this fanfic long ago, and whe i've found it again i was so happy because i think that it's amazing!

Ahaha, loved the story! Bonus points for the sasuke thing!

Again, another exellent story! It had some great lines in it, that made me ell oh ell

1) Tobi smiled again. "It's a formal introduction. Shake my hand!" the kid chirped. Chirped! Was this kid a fucking bird?

I loved the plot line too and their were no mistakes I could find.

2)"Then at least stop throwing things at me!"

"I'm not a poof, un!"

"IT'S OKAY TO BE GAY, DEIDARA!"

"I"M NOT GAY!"

3)"I know, I know, but it just makes me feel bad to use it on people ... Ah- HEY!" Itachi yelled. "That's it, you asked for it!"

There was a cry of pain and then silence.

Itachi sighed again. "...Yeah, it's all good over here, too," he told Tobi.

Well done, another great story that I have stalked... your work is really inspiring to me! And some of my SasoDei fics have been inspired by your awesome stories!

Thanks for the excellent writing!

heh shall there be a second chapter?

Love it! :D

ahaha! this was enjoyable!

Lol, of course they planned it XD

I wouldn't mind if Sori had sex with Dei on da ground ;D

oh wow... This is great! Honestly, I really like Deidara and Itahi's little argument... I can't stop laughing about it. I hope you're able to udate soon.

So funny and cute! I LOVE the way Itachi acts. It's hilarious!

That was hilarious, I loved it and awesome job but how about you continue it please, the end sounds like the middle or beginning

I feel inspired to go write my own fanfic now. Since my inspiration usually doesn't last long, I'm gonna keep the long list of what I love about your writing, such as the fantastic flow, the way you totally pulled off the entrance-with style-and how much it made me laugh, to myself. You? One of my new Favorite Authors*

Seriously though. I was holding back some serious horse-laughs. "IT'S OKAY TO BE GAY, DEIDARA!" "I'M NOT GAY!" I don't know why, but that was the most hilarious thing I think I've ever found on here. xD Hell...I'm drunk off sleep deprivation. Maybe that's it. Anyway, please continue writing, and I'll continue favoriting! ;D

Sweet. *laughs* Nicely done, I love how you wrote it. The visualizations were amazing, and details were- dare I say it? Perfect. In my mind anyway. I love the pace, and the way the beginning started out was phenomenal. Amazing. I love everything about the characters, and plot. The summary was just as awesome. Brilliant.

-Nic

Awww, this was a really enjoyable story! It made me giggle and laugh all through out it. Damn that Tobi, what an intimidating little bastard he is! The ending made me laugh the most though XD Oh Itachi, poor poor Itachi having to deal with an in denial of being gay Deidara XD I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading more by you soon! .