This is so twisted and/but hilarious!

Neversoft Developed This Game,Right?

lolololololololololol :] love it

hahahahahahaahhahahahahahahhahaahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha

FUNNIEST FRIKKIN FANFIC EVER

I think i have a new favorite series

congrats

Hahaha this is amazing XD I love fluttershy, and I am now officially changing my gamertag to Fluttershy-Kill-U! :D

Lol I was about to cry like halfway through, was laughing so hard

This is AWESOME!

That's fucked up, having them eat pepperoni pizza. They are ponies, which means they are vegetarians. still love your story, though. It's hilarious!

Hehe Fluttershys a pervert.

EAT IT, BITCH

I loled.

Did I ever tell you that you're awesome?

I did?

I HAVEN'T TOLD YOU ENOUGH TIMES

Well...that was alright. It was a good take on the idea, but the tense issues (Simple Present one moment, Simple Past the next), the formatting e.g. "..." Said _, where the s should be small sort of hampered it from becoming more than something decent. The chat-style presentation is actually okay, even if someponies might think that it's against TOS (personally for this sort of fic? Chatspeak was the way to go, so good on you). The only problem is that it gets old reaaaal quick. 3 chapters in, and I'm expecting the same - nothing too new. Hmmm, and Fluttershy is too OOC wayy too fast. Sure she can raeg and be awesumz at the game, but it's too abrupt, so you lose some potential there. Also you missed out on chances to make Twilight go nerd-mode with games (reading manuals, walkthroughs, generally being adorkable).

Overall, it was okay. Rather amusing at first, but could do with some more editing.

Love how you included 'MLP FIN' in that note since it's the acronym of the story :D.

loved it. I look forward to the sequal, and hope it comes soon.

Pinkie pie didn't just break the fourth wall, she pulverised it into dust!

WHAT NO STARCRAFT 2 REFFERENCES? I AM DISSAPOINT!