I LOVE IT! Absolutely love it! Please update this story soon! PLEASE!

Please please please update soon i have read your fanfiction sooooo many times and each time it sooo good,pls update soon

I love the way you describe the relationships between all of the characters-it's also impressive how you blended the two worlds together so seamlessly
I can totally hear Jasdevi saying every line too-ahh Jasdero's too cute

i love this story, i hope you can update soon ;-;

More interaction with Liz and David? Pleeeease? And could you try and get David released? Cause I don't think that there can be much progression in the story with David imprisoned

I hope you come back soon! I really like this story!

This story is absolutely amazing and fantastically creative. I love the way you write the POVs for David and Jasdero, it makes them seem real and important and wonderful, giving them more personality than the manga did. The way you write it just fits them, somehow.
I can agree with another reviewer and say that Liz does seem a bit wimbly (wimpy) at times, but that would be my only problem.
Could you update this one day, please? You would make so many people happy.
Words and Fire

please update soon i want to know what will happened:)

I absolutely love this story. This is one of the craziest combinations ever, but you make it work. There aren't a lot of good cross-overs out there, but you have completely surpassed all expectations I had for his fanfiction when I first started reading it. And I have to say, you raised the bar yet again with the sequel. I think I love this so much partially because of the way you write their POV's. A lot of times the grammar isn't correct (at least in my opinion), but that's okay because people don't really think in complete sentences. Your characterizations are very interesting and they seem like real people. I love how you show Jasdevi's bond (ie: the whole reading-each-other's-minds and stuff). It really does seem like they are two halves of the same whole. I like Liz and Patty too, but I think your representation of them is a little off. Liz is a little wishy-washy. She was a former Demon of Brooklyn, and in the manga and anime is rather intimidating at times, and kind of bad a**. The only thing I've ever seen her really terrified of is supernatural things (ie: mummies, ghosts, etc.), though I suppose anyone would be terrified when they suddenly wake up in a new world. And Patty is not completely sunshine and flowers, in the anime and manga, she gets angry quite a few times, and when she gets angry, she fills up with a border-line pychotic rage. And, Liz doesn't really care when Patty cusses, in fact, one time she encouraged her to get Kid moving. All in all, the sisters are rather tough, growing up in Brooklyn and all. Though, I did enjoy seeing your characterizations of them (I especially love the dynamics between Patty and Jasdero), and it did work in this particular fanfiction. Good job! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Aww poor Jasdero. It's not fair that he can't see his brother. I really like this story I hope you write more, I wanna know what happens next. Keep up the good work!

Update please?i am hoping to see what happens next soon:)

please update!I am looking forward to the next chapter. :D

awesome story! Please, please, please update!

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Please continue! :) It's really amazing so far :D