i honestly find the loom thing a really awesome idea, like not everyone can give birth so just I'm sure that's amazing for people who want children but can't concieve. (of course adoption works but hey.)

hello! i just wanted to say that this is one of my favourite fics in the fandom! i know you wrote this a long time ago (nearly a decade ago) and might not even read reviews for it anymore, but just in case you do, here's what i have to say:

i read this fic for the first time years ago - certainly not when you first posted it, but maybe when i first got into the fandom around 4 years ago, when i was a teen. and this fic stayed with me, i'd think about it randomly throughout my life. sometimes something would pop up and i'd think 'ah, that good doctor who fanfic i read' and you know what? i didn't read it only that once, i read it a few times since then, including now! i couldn't tell you the exact number of times i re-read it but it's been a lot, because at random moments i would think 'man, i really want to re-read that fic' and that's what i did today actually! bc i love your characterisation of rose! i love JD who's so adorable and funny! i love how you gave weight behind the void! how the characters interacted and reacted!

and you know what? i think i'll love it for a long time to come :) thank you for writing this, thank you for sharing this with us and i hope that you never, never stop writing 3 may your days be filled with happiness 3

God I fucking love this needing Kae, absolutely fantastic (yes that was a choice word), and despite being written ago and not your absolute best writing (I don't mean offence lmao) I do tucking love this, the build up the actual climax, the way she reveals herself ahhhh I fucking love it, Jackie and Mickey and the way all his companions come into it, one of the best dw fics our there, Hhhhh

Ooo I do love this chapter, with JD showing his tru true humanity, but I am completely confused with the choice of JD being in 3rd person and everything else in 1st but oh well

Right let's try this again I hit the send button to early.
Any time I remember this fic I think that it's completely black, but apparently it's white? Which is actually way worse so

Oh my god I forgot this was all in first person,

Oh my gurgle! This has to be my new favorite concept! Pov from the void!

Wow. A rip-roaring story who cares about a few typos. Thank you for writing this thoroughly enjoyable read.

Ok...
you sure?

loved it!

Argh dropping Theta at the end and then not giving a hint of his reaction. Fav character in this was JD and the differences from the series otherwise it was like one of those 'lets watch the series' again stories.

Good overall, but I liked the first half far more than the last half of this story. You got bogged down describing everything from the episodes, with very little changed. You even gave Rose some of Donna's exact dialog; surely Rose wouldn't say and do the exact same things (mostly). I'm here for your original ideas, not recaps of the show.

There are still a ton of misspellings, even in your notes, but the story is interesting. I wish you wouldn't include entire scenes from the show verbatim; it gets boring.

Great story. It's really unique. You have quite a few typos and grammar errors, though. Almost every single piece of dialog from the Dalek in this chapter had a mistake. You also need to review the differences between their and there, as well as it's/its and too/to. It detracts from a great plot.

Just re-read this fantastic story and wanted to let you know this story has not been forgotten.