You're a writer extraordinaire Sam. It appears these two lovers will finally do what they need to do and trust each other. I agree with her move to a less stressful job, but I have a feeling it will not be forever. Again well done Sam.

I have read every one of your stories, even the 'one shots' that I don't usually read. So...That says everything. You are very good. Yes, disappointed in the ending of this story and a sequel was never written, but more importantly was that the killers and rapists 'got away' with it. The 'complete' was rushed, but you gave me many hours of incredible enjoyment, so thank you.

You take the story to an interesting pathway. Ziva does not want to return... still you've written it so convincingly that I can believe and understand it :)
hope you continue one day

Wonderful chapter! :)

Awesome chapter! :)

Wonderful chapter! :)

Lovely chapter! :)

Ah, no...it hurts to see the kind of pain both of them are in...

Oh, no...this is terrible. :( Not your writing of course, but the circumstances Tony and Ziva found themselves in...

Oh nope nope nope its got tiva so already put a big red flag up im not reading shitting tiva that always ends uo about ziva and plus ziva is nothing but a selfish bully and a bitch shes not good enough for tony

So far so good! I'm enjoying the dark story line.

I love the first chapter of this story. I love the details, and word choice. I also love the theme and stuff. I like violence and stories like this for some reason. Thank you so much for writing and posting!

I liked the first 2 chapters.

poor ziva

i feel bad for ziva