a mirai pissed off videl hissing shouting yelling to her nerd boy wth is wrong with you you only have one arm bicep hand and shoulder and you still plan on fighting with the androids ARE YOU INSANE LISTEN HERE SON GOHAN I LOVE YOU don't go to fight the androids ok

Videl to gohanuh uh uh you are going nowhere

Beautiful. Just, beautiful. I love how you captured the moment so gracefully, so tastefully. The beacon of hope in their apocalyptic world.

I wonder if they ever met in the Mirai timeline, if Pan was ever born, if Videl somewhat survived or something or if Mirai Trunks and Pan would ever meet... Because, for that last comment, let's face it, being the last Sayian and the last defender of Earth is a fate quite bleak and depressing.

J'aime.

Hmm maybe she's pregnant now? I wonder if Mirai Pan and Trunks would happen lol. I've never read Mirai Videl before and for some twisted reason, it makes want to read her with Android 17 and Mirai Trunks love triangle.

I don't know why, but somehow I found this kind of heartbreaking, knowing that Gohan dies in Mirai timeline... but I've always been curious about whether or not Gohan and Videl would still be attracted to one another in the future which is destroyed by the Androids. I think you captured the moment of passion between them perfectly! There's not a thing I would have changed. This piece was absolute perfection! At the end of this one-shot I thought it was kind of like... ah, I can't think of the word I'm looking for.. not foreshadowing, but something akin to that? Anyway, it made me think of the Gh/Vi in DBZ which we all know and love! You've got this sense of foreboding at the start of this read, knowing that this romantic encounter will be their one and only, and then your reminded that they do in fact find love again, just in an alternate universe.
As a whole, this was flawless. As far as particulars are concerned- flawless :) Honestly impressive, stunning writing. Can't wait to read more of the fanfics you've posted! I'm sure they will keep me plenty entertained on sleepless nights and long waits between college classes! Favorited! Congrats on gaining yet another fan (me)!

A truly spectacular story. Honestly, it was really well written. I love the idea of them meeting in the Future time-line as though they are really destined for one another. I found it fascinating. Well done.

WOW :0

Excellent Mirai story...

That was a good oneshot. Even in that horrible world, Gohan and Videl meet. It sounds like Mr. Satan thought too high of himself and got killed by the androids. I wonder if they did meet again or if Gohan died before he had a chance to keep his promise. Do you think in that circumstance, even in this horrible world, that Pan was still conceived?

I really enjoyed this, but I don't think it required a M rating. I remember reading some of your first fics years ago, and I loved them. _ I felt like this had the perfect combination of smut, haha.

Keep up the good work!

aww xD I really liked this xD It's so sweet

I really enjoyed this, but I don't think it required a M rating. I remember reading some of your first fics years ago, and I loved them. _ I felt like this had the perfect combination of smut and not-smut.

Keep up the good work. :)

I remember this one :) What a pleasure to re-read it.

Hope you're fairing well.

~Nor