Work on your English.

Oui!(That's french for yes)

I knew this story felt familiar, I just realized I’ve read this before haha. Still gonna keep (re)reading because it’s a good story though

I’ve enjoyed this story thus far, let’s see if it continues to be this good

genius!

Is it really done and finished? You just forgot to bring Goku in the story. The reason for the party was Goku's 'supposed arrival'. I was waiting. Until you said in the note below that you're done

you did your research...exceptional!

I love this so much

Last year my science class went to the beach teacher had one rule at the beggining of the year:no swimming.
by the end of the year it was no harrasing ducks, climbing tree's, knocking small children older(it was a bayside beach with a childrens park), eating dead fish, talking to strangers, and playing in the parking - if we interupted one more funeral or wedding we would get suspended.

Yeah...some people are so dumb that the "do not give our school a bad name" speech is nessicarry.

J'aime.

Cute. I like it. Although you never said whether Videl ever got warned not to use her shampoo/conditioner or not... That could end badly. *smirk* Thanks for writing! -Jesi Ki Kage

androids are a type of robot that can shoot lasers!

Your fanfiction was brilliant! It had a sweet ending, and the little humorous parts were hilarious. I loved Krillin's comment about Videl falling very far from the tree. That really cracked me up :)

AWWWWW
videl kissed gohan
update this is just so cute

"threesome" probably wasn't the best word to use... just saying.