Just finished re reading this... This was a really good Fanfic..wish you had finished it but atleast it was left off well... Good Job.. can really see your writing improve as the chapters went on.

I'm sorry to say this but when you hit a serve and the ball lands in the correct field behind the net after hitting the net, it is an error and you have to once again hit your first serve. Having said that your 'Dance to the Apocalypse' is technically speaking an incorrect serve that wouldn't give you any points as the ball needs to hit the net in order to give it the right spin and that isn't allowed.

This story would be better without gay thing but it my thinking

Rough the letters upside down smooth its right side up.

I just found your story and have enjoyed reading it. Hopefully there will be new chapters soon.

Fantastic!~~~~ Good luck~

Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update

Waaaah! Hurry up with editing - I love this fic too much!

Woo! Good luck editing! Although I don't think there's anything worth editing, the story was that amazing! I'm glad Ryoma's not permanently maimed! Hehe and looking forward to their revenge - it'll surely be epic!

It's a great story. I hope you continue updating it.

Don't cut his hair!

Hi
Read your present things nicely and the descriptions help paint the picture. I enjoyed it. Thanks for you keep writing.
with best wishes.

Really enjoyin this fic so far..loved d Tezuka factor..

That's fair enough! I'm hopping that you'll post a new chapter soon, cause I really enjoyed the story! I'm looking foward to it.

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i found another great story 3