ok OUCH. this HURT and i CRIEd but i love it s h.

Its screwed up man...shows over to and the only thing i can hear right now is the ending episodes credits song...im so fucking sad now from this...shits good tho man...

Omg that was phenomenal. That was a seriously powerful story and it really tugged at my heartstrings.
Amazing

I'm crying. Thank you!

Reasons why I love and hate fanfiction; this is a wonderful piece but not okay ;-; no one should have this much power over one's emotions (darn you Moffat and Hussie!)

Joking sincerity aside, this was wonderful! You orchestrated this very well, and it flowed nicely. It's sad to think about, but Finn is only human. La Fin de Finn, ouais? (that was a cruddy joke; ignore it).

Thank you for your time and effort in writing this :D! I thouroughly enjoyed it .

Thanks for reducing me to tears!

I'm a grown ass man, crying about fictional characters.

Damn it all.

IM NOT CYING YYPOR CRING

This is really beautiful and sad. I love it. I nearly cried (and it's very hard to make me cry). Thanks for the amazing story!

Wow,talk about bittersweet. It must be hard for marcaline and PB to be immortal what with all their friends dying. I'm was kinda hoping I would get to see the ice king in this although I can understand this was made in 2011 so I'm pretty sure no one knew a lot about the ice king. (Sighs) I can just imagine all the fanfiction that's going to pop up when this series ends. It so much easier to write stuff in canon when you actually KNOW what's canon in the first place.

shit, am I crying,,,?
son of a bitch,,,

Amazing. I swear, something about this show has always stood out to me: some unexplainable feeling, in the adventure and the atmosphere of Ooo and the characters... I'm just not sure what. But I know I haven't been finding it in the myriad of 'Finn and Marceline fall in love' stories.

You got it. Whatever it is. And even besides that, this is just plain sad. In a good way, though- you really draw the emotion out of Finn's character, and what might happen.

Making me cry man why'd you go and do that? ::Blubber, blubber:: TwT
PFB
p.s. it's still good though.

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?

Holy crap this is depressing, you could actually put me in depression for a whole week again with how bittersweet and sad this is. more walks around the lake after sunset for me haha! but seriously though...you COULD actually put me in depression, it's fanfics like these that tell someone's whole life that always does this to me but I keep reading them for some reason..