I really (REALLY!) love this One-shot. Amazing work!

WOW ! That's my favorite Cleon by now!
You gave the motel scene such a sweet and real vibe.
I just wonder what Sherry was doing that took so long ... lol
Anyway, thank you very very much for sharing your work. It was very well written and besides the crazyness of the act of taking the bullet out, this was the most realistic pós RE2 ending Ive seen so far!
How your portraied them felt very canon, very fiting. Thank you!

And also, Excuse me in advance for any mistakes regarding my writing, cuz english isnt my motherlanguage (Brazilian Portuguese is) and I'm in a hurry!

xoxo

This is surprisingly good.

That must have been really painful for Leon. I was pretty much upset how Degeneration went, how Angela and Leon kissed. UGH! But I came along this fanfic and took the movie back to an L/C pairing, in other words, better for me cuz I love their pairing. _

I hope you'll be able to write more stories like this. :)

Great story. I hope you write another Cleon story soon.

Nice Story!

Very well written, I enjoyed every second of it. Kudos!

And a very good job at keeping the "one unbelievable premise" rule alive.

OMG This was great! I love your Cleon fanfics. Keep 'em coming please!

Great work, nice premise too. It warms my heart to see someone on here take so much joy in their work as to take a screenwriting class, i hope to make the change to author someday and am trying to learn as much as possible. Whatever your doing, your doing it well, i personally do not like the Leon/Claire pairing, as their is nowhere near enough context for the two romantically, however you seem to do a great job writing these two very genuinly and heartfelt. You have the makings of a very intelligent writer, i hope to read more from you in the future :)

Crimson

To go from the a fic like "Hands" and then to this... what the hell happen? I mean realy

Absolutely LOVE your writing! I respect you as an audience member for understanding what you request your audience to believe in your story. I think you unbelievable premise, while unbelievable in some aspects, is more realistic than most I've read. While it's not ideal and you risk a lot doing so, it is pheasable to remove a bullet yourself. I saw that in the regard to the fact that I wasn't like you had Claire and Leon create an anti-virus serum and save the entire human race from Umbrella's zombie apocalypse. I also greatly appreciate your disclaimer at the end, explaining your unbelievable premise and what would happen in actuality, should someone unfortunate be shot. I respect that you don't pretend anything and state the facts. This is definitely one of the best, most realistic, and most well written "Cleon" fics I've ever read! Thank you for your great story and hard work! Absolutely adding you to my alerts!

YOU'RE THREE STORIES AWAY FROM 100! Make sure the 100th gets to be Cleon!

I think this is amongst one of my favorite pieces; I love all your pieces but I just love the emotion in this one. I honestly felt for the both of them, each suffering in their own way. I doubt you even need constructive criticism, but I might as well throw my two cents in.

You need to post this to the leon and claire community on LJ! I just joined but I looked through all 326 posts in like, a DAY.

and it was worth it. I only made an account to join, but it's johnfreemann. Can't wait for more of your stories!

-Kiran.

Once again, you prove to be an incredible writer. I love the way you manage to give life to those great characters. I hope you'll never get tired of writing Cleon stories. ;)