| Reviews for Marriage Ending |
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Parrisblues24 chapter 1 . 2/9 I’m years late. But I loved this. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 In so many other stories where Jake has been an absolute horrid friend/ex, he always pressures Bella into still being his friend. And usually spineless Bella gives in. This story was more realistic in the fact that she couldn't forgive him for what he had done to her and refused to continue the friendship. And he had the audacity to think she would still be his friend because he said sorry. Delusional much. |
snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 7/18/2015 This is great.. Bella with a backbone and taking on Edward and tearing him a new a-hole! Loved it |
Mrs. Kauhn chapter 1 . 9/21/2012 This was awesome i love seeing strong bella |
magmom2 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012 Not at all what I was expecting. It was a great story. |
jpmoonlight chapter 1 . 12/26/2011 hii.. nice story, loved it... bad jacob was a new one for me... |
sanglin chapter 1 . 10/24/2011 I hope this turns into a multi chapter fic even if that wasn't in the plans. It is amazing and f***ed all in one. |
Liomsa chapter 1 . 9/24/2011 This is my favorite one shot ever. I have read it over and over again. I love how Bella put the sharks in their place. I love that she took the high road concerning outing Jake. I love how she dumped Jake. I mean, really. He thought they would still be "besties." I adored how she put L(iar)awyer Slimeward in his place. Lawyers like that are a dime a dozen, and they think they can do whatever they want in the name of getting the client what he wants, or in the name of winning. Not checking facts like that- gets the other side whatever they want. Lucky for them, Bella just wanted OUT. I think I would have at least threatened them with the defamation lawsuit to scare them, but this Bella is certainly a better person than I am. I believe the triple threat lawyers have had their asses handed to them by a simple woman. A woman with more soul in her middle finger then the 4 men have in all their big soulless bodies together. They will never be able to touch her. |
countrygirl043986 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011 I love this story of bella rising up especially putting an arrogant edward in his place and calling him out. |
erika shoval chapter 1 . 8/17/2011 So very interesting, your idea is really unique. It was a pleasure to read your story. |
MissTeenageDream chapter 1 . 8/16/2011 Wow! This was really really amazing! I'm so sad to see that this is just a one-shot! Maybe you could do a really small snippet of Bella finally finding happiness or something :) |
cullenmeadow chapter 1 . 8/16/2011 Hi really enjoyed the perspective you gave the characters in this o/s. Am left pondering whether you might be willing to turn this o/s into a full story with Edward/Bella HEA given how this story began, since I am a Team Edward gal! Thanks for all your stories do enjoy reading them. |
AnahyR chapter 1 . 8/16/2011 I don't have words to describe how awesome this story is! I like how strong and defiant Bella is. at some point it made me wonder if Jake and Edward had a relationship, they seemed to have each other backs. I love the Bella of this story! she is so strong and powerful and secure and on top of that all she is really loyal, Jake is the one who messed up, and I loved the fact that you didn't sent her straight to Edward's arms, they were both bad guys! xoxooxoxo |
Moltz chapter 1 . 8/16/2011 Let me just start with...WOW! Your word incite so many different sensations and emotional turmoil. Are you sure this is just a one-shot? Would love to read how the Cullens dismantle Felix out of respect for Ms. Swan; and Mr. Black's life without Bella; and how Bella survived another life altering blow. Your mind and words are more than entertaining. They cause one to think! Thanks for sharing your gift. |
KATHRYN00 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011 Wow! Can't wait to hear what is next. K |