Why arent you updating? ;(

This is amazing! You really really need to keep going! Cheers for Pinkie and Dash!

FlufflePuff

(If youre going to reply (idk i usually reply to reviewrs) then can you please fwd to FlufflePuff? o:)

She's baaaaaaaack..

Coooooooooool, now I like this, GREAT.

Ummm... why do you hate Dashie?

You filly son ova bitch. How do you sleep at night knowing that all your fans are dying of suspense. P.S. You did say youre a filly, right? By any chance are you a frisky filly? ; ')~ Also, EPIC story!

You know, about a minute ago I was praying for this to end so I could go to sleep, but now I can't believe it's over! FIX IT! (It's a great story so far, made me somewhat scared to go get some water, and now I can't look at mirrors. Thanks.)

you should end it with pinkie pie killing everpony through rainbow dash of course. read the alt endings to cupcakes and rocket to insanity - all of which i laughed my ass off at - and use those hilarious pinkie killings (and one rainbow killing) to do away with those ponies. i am sure there will be enough data from each to formulate the bestest most super terrific awesome deaths pinkie can undoubtably create. pinkie easily best being in Equestria

you should end it with pinkie pie killing everpony through rainbow dash of course. read the alt endings to cupcakes and rocket to insanity - all of which i laughed my ass off at - and use those hilarious pinkie killings (and one rainbow killing) to do away with those ponies. i am sure there will be enough data from each to formulate the bestest most super terrific awesome deaths pinkie can undoubtably create. pinkie easily best being in Equestria

first off ... such a cliché

second ... the ending swap was much to fast, not in the dream but in reality, and it felt like i missed a step

third ... i thought it was ditzy'derpy'hooves who delivered mail

this is a very good story so far. i look forward to seeing you complete it! and before i forget: SHEEEEEEE'S BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

I have to agree with The Enduring Man-Child that this seems like a strange way to treat your favorite character ever. You're doing Pinkie Pie a far greater disservice than you're doing Rainbow Dash, really; she's so out of character, she's not really Pinkie Pie anymore.

On top of the characterization issues, the story is neither scary nor suspenseful; it's just gory, and the gore itself is bland and boring. "Her stomach, intestines and pancreas were completely gone" is about as scary as a shopping list. Not to mention, if my organs were falling out, I don't think I'd take note of whether or not I still had my pancreas.

The plot just feels like an afterthought, an excuse to violently torture and kill Rainbow Dash. Been there, done that. I never thought I'd say this, but: Cupcakes did it better.

oh no pinkie has returned, hide your aligators. i love the story

Nice story!Love how descriptive it was,& how it showed how Rainbow seemed to slowly go insane...I give it 5 stars!

So...Pinkie is a supernatural ghost who is going to possess Rainbow Dash and use her to kill all the other ponies? And this is how you treat your favorite pony ever?

I simply don't understand why so many authors (bronies or fillies) have decided that Pinkie is a supernatural monster. What on the show has she ever done to hint at such a thing? Why do SO MANY PEOPLE see her this way?

I don't get it.