cute!

Lol i loved that ending

Assuming the pool is your average 21-foot, 48 inch deep one, it would hold 13,500 gallons of water. A 13 ounce can of Reddi-Whip costs about 2.48$ (according to the Walmart in my area), and 128 ounces make a singular gallon.

13,500 gallons 1,728,000 ounces, or in simpler terms, 132,923 and 1/13th 13 Oz. cans of whipped cream. That's 329,649$ and 4 cents in US dollars.

Of course, they'll also have to clean up the pool before it attracts bees.

Well, she wanted to start it and now look what she did!

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Uh right the anal... while fun, sexy, taboo, and enjoyable. Its not really... ideal for a girl to jump right into it. Especially not a virgin.

I liked it alot and i would like to draw it out if you dont mind. Giving you the credit and linking the story to the cover...ill only make a cover and if you dont like it then ill stop ill link you the cover once im done and have iit scanned onto my computer

I'm guessing you usually write yaoi, so I should just clear something up-anal does nothing for women but hurt like hell, apparently. Seeing as they have no prostate, all it does is give the guy what he wants, and hurt the girl, so...?

wow, for someone who doeswn't do straight couples this was really good:D Thanks

Nice job on trying to do a straight pairing. It was pretty good