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The troop is 46231 actually. Not 46321

I have been hit by a remember-inator! It is called memory notifications from Facebook and Instagram

i gave your story a shout out in the first chapter of my phineas and ferb great mouse detective crossover fic no need to thank me you deserved it

So, I want to read the sequel, but I need sleep coz I've got tests tomorrow, and I wish I could, but I have to sleep. This is a great book, and it's almost midnight here and... Wow I'll read the sequel tomorrow, promise. I love this book, time has flown. Thanks for writing it!

Holy lord! This may be the best P and F ever I have ever read! Plus, I have the same theroy as you that Phineas also has a thing for Isabella(Kiss scene in second D comes to mind) and you played it so well. Great story! Definitely worth a fav!

Fantastic Plot! The writing was also quite strong. It does feel like a few loose ends weren't tied up. Them knowing about Perry, etc. But overall amazing job!

Love the story it's really hard to find these kind of stories

oh this is gonna be good!

Um... Okay.

This was really dark. That's not a problem, just slightly disturbing considering it's a kids' show. I'm sorry to say that everyone seemed really OOC to me. Especially Ferb. Since when does he talk that much? Not to mention the ages were totally screwed up - canonically, in the show, Candace is fifteen and the boys are seven, so four years would have made Candace nineteen and the boys twelve. And that's another thing: that is a LOT of kissing for a bunch of fourteen-year olds.

Most of that is my opinion only, though. So, this is the stuff that has nothing to do with what I think:

Your writing style is pretty good, and your spelling is also not bad. The POV changes were kind of confusing, and the giant paragraphs were also a little bit intimidating, so I found myself skimming most of it.

I'd give it about two out of five stars.

This story was amazicising! Yes it is a word except not really. This was seriously one of the best stories i have read. I can't wait to read the sequel! umm ok bye now

Wow. It's been ages since I last read this story. It nearly brings me to tears (I'm a rather emotional guy) to think that this was written four years ago. I should probably stop reminiscing, it's going to emotionally break me.

OH MY GOD! I loved every second of this!
There are very few good Phineas and Ferb fanfics out there, and this one's at the top!

Oh, and Phinabella for life!

this is serious shit for a kids show

Wow. That was really good. It was a bit dark for my taste, but it was well-written and dramatic. Great work.

Best 5 words ever!