Different, but kinda neat, and I enjoyed it. And yes Olive does seem to have to save Peter, from himself.

Dude this is awesome. It sucks that we have a few weeks before we see him, but this, this is how I would imagine that she would feel without him. Great work!

I am also going through Fringe withdrawl and your fic has helped immensely. :) I like that you concentrate on Peter's "habit of being taken." Creative transitions.

I think this sums up their relationship beautifully. Love your insight into Olivia's feeling. Can't wait for season 4.

Really enjoyed this story. You had an overarching theme and you stuck to it. Calling in great examples of show canon and adding your personal touch to it, to great effect I might add. You expanded on each event and added additional moments that didn't feel misplaced at all. Very well done. Even though the moments you chose were hallmark in nature, the way you presented them didn't seem rote at all. Outstanding execution. Keep writing about Fringe!

you left me speechless. .BEAUTIFUL!

You amazing human being! Thank you for sharing with amazing fic with us!

.ING! No word to describe how much I loved this. :)

For your first time at FF you hit it out out the park!

Thanks!

Very nice!

This is very well-written. You have the characters down and I really enjoyed the atmosphere that you conveyed through your writing. Your choice of imagery and language were quite good and I love your style.

For some reason, I really liked when you described the lab with a 'morose quietness'. There was something very interesting about that, and it stood out to me.

One minor thing, there were a few run-on sentences here and there. Just watch for those.

Also, great job with Olivia's emotions. I found that they conveyed especially well in the sections during 'Over There Part 2' and after the season three finale.

Nice work, please write more Fringe fanfiction :D

CP7

Hurt angsty kidnapped Peter is my favorite but sadly there are not many of them around. Your story totally tamed my cravings though. Loved it and love to read more from you. The hiatus is haaaaaarf!

Oh, this is so sweet. Poor Olivia; I wondered what would happen after the season finale. Great job! I loved this; it really showed the progression of their relationship.

Oh, very nice! I love the way you've pulled together scenes from past episodes. The details are great, they add to the story, I think!

I really like this line, too - "her greatest weakness and her biggest strength, the solid rock she clung to and the quicksand beneath her feet." It's such a great description of their relationship at that time.

I hope you'll keep writing - I like your style and I'd like to read more. And yes, 9/23 can't get here quick enough!

This was lovely. I teared up a bit at the end.

I love you.

This was GORGEOUS. It was BEAUTIFUL. It was MOVING and LOVELY and CLEVER and SO SO SO SO WELL-WRITTEN. This is what I've been needing! You are the best :D This is unbetaed? I couldn't find a single mistake! Never be nervous again, you're a born writer! I loved the repetitive words throughout the story, it made it seem so deep, and the title is perfect. Write another Fringe story for me to fangirl over! Please?

-Jolly :)

P.S. 39 days to September 23!

This is beautiful! And I agree with you, the new season needs to get here soon!