Reviews for The Pebble
Shonna C chapter 5 . 10/25/2018
is there going to be a continuation to this story? I'd like to see some of their triumphs as well. the way naruto and harry are similar and how the village is starting to connect to naruto is great, but i feel like i'd like to see more connections too. does that make sense?
In The Mix chapter 5 . 8/18/2018
I really really like this and I hope you continue to add to it! I want to see how the village reacts to magic and not just that, I kept thinking of Harry's primary school days. Learning to read from the basics. Will the ninja learn too and incorporate that into like code? The writing system and language is just so different. Also what will happen once they get to the end of Harry's life? Does the pebble survive Pein's attack? I'm just so intrigued by this whole concept.

Also, like how else has this effected Konoha's culture beyond just tourism? Like you said, they think this is like some old god stuff here. Are they more religious? Are references to Harry or the Dursley's used in like sayings? What would happen if Harry actually appears? I can just imagine the riots and Harry's confusion of having people actually/factually knowing his life better than he does. There are just so many possibilities!

Please please PLEASE UPdate this! It's really good and I really want to see what happens next.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/29/2017
Interesting
doraemax chapter 5 . 5/10/2017
yeah, this is not crack-fic... but i am really really curious where you are going with this. thanks for sharing
fernandfeather chapter 5 . 2/13/2017
This is a really interesting crossover! I like the parallels between Harry and Naruto and seeing the realizations in the villagers.
rain88 chapter 5 . 1/26/2017
This is beautiful.
Snickering Fox chapter 5 . 11/3/2016
AHAHAHAHAHA WHAT THE HELL
WHAT THE HELL
Oh my, this is shocking
Just... Your plot. What.
MeinNameIstHase chapter 5 . 10/29/2016
I think you have a good grasp on the characters. Thank you for the update.
Miyu Kokomi chapter 5 . 10/29/2016
Me encanta
Es tan original esta historia
Única, nueva, novedosa... por favor continúa
Veo una gran historia en pequeños relatos
Love-is-Cyanide chapter 4 . 3/8/2016
Damn.
I swear im not crying, my eyes are just sweating... yeah...

No but seriously, this is amazing to read. You have a real talent for putting the emotion into the words, keep it up!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/19/2015
I died a little inside reading this... Right in the feels! When the chapter title said Dog Woman I honestly thought Harry's point of view would be of Marge.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 4 . 4/20/2015
So...she realized that her and the village are to Naruto what the Dursleys and all adults were to Harry. Great! I always disliked Konoha for their stupidity.
Renee.Sarah chapter 4 . 3/18/2015
Too bad this is not continued. It was very emotional piece. Built very well. Realistic.
jully123 chapter 4 . 3/16/2015
For some reason I remember more of this story than there actually is. Wishful imagination I guess.
Skyray chapter 2 . 9/3/2014
Ohhh does the flashback end here? Cause if it went on for any longer they might want to start marking the town as a touristic attraction :P Okay you got me, now I want to know what's going to happen outside of pebble-POV lol
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