I really do like this softer Elphie compared to most fanfic's takes...plz protect my soft green child thanks

EP - IC! Wow.

Spoiler Alert :The wizard and madam morrible is the bad guys Edlyn!

what the fuck u didnt even read the story! WTF your fucking guessing! the wtf your fucking guesing the review!

wtf why do they skip scenes, and no het in verdigis what the fuck r u talking about?

O.M.F.G. are you KIDDING me!? After ALL of that? All of that reading and waiting and building of anticipation, you actually completely skip the sex scene!? You actually describe glinda losing her virginity to some guy, but you completely skip elphabe losing hers!? I usually don't mind, but in this story, it seemed very crucial to elphabas character! OMG I will definitely never read this again, or any of your other stories. Why do you even bother to write femslash when you clearly wish you were writing a het story?

i think this might be the first hetero story ive ever read that claims to have two women as the main pairing

well jeez, now shes even marrying men. what next, is she going to let a football team run a train on her?

she's checking out a bunch of girls, just looking, and shes having sex with a bunch of guys. i would think youre trying to get across that shes... idk.. repressing her real desires or whatever? but that doesnt really make sense, bc shes obviously bisexual, not a lesbian, she is definetly attracted to men. idk, whatever. i just hope the actual ship starts soon, and doesnt bone anymore dudes

uugh. she finally got her cock. (i wish you wouldnt have described the sex so much) i hope that means we can get on with the story now. ... ...sry for being such a bitch lmao. i do love your stories, i swear! lol

i gotta say im a bit disapointed 8( i was looking forward to galindas training. its always one of my favorite parts in an adventure story. but all it has consisted of so far is her wanting some boys cock, and whining about how she cant have it. this is the first time ive been unimpressed with your writing

this story is just as amazing as your others

Im sure ive reveiwed this in the past but i just reread this! Amazing story! Absolutely loved it. Thank you thank you!

Maybe I'm a little late? Who cares :)
I just wanted to say really quick that I love your work. I admit I used to hate zombie/apocalypse AU, but your story is truly amazing.
I actually wanted to review before, but when I finished reading it was like 4 in the morning soooo...
Hope you have a nice day!
From a weird Anon ;)

I loved this story very much, thank you for sharing it with us! :D Im a huge fan of your writing since I read "not completely altogether here", you are amazing!