Loved this story! I wish the game had ended this way! It was super clear that Emil had feelings for Richter and vice versa! Love u for writing! XD

Thanks for writing the ending that should have been in the game to begin with. You've made this TOS fan very happy!

AHHHHH! Marta's death was soo sad! I feel really bad about Ratatosk! And thankfully Emil and Richter had their happy ending :D

Hmmm...great job! Cute and daring at the end...i like it!

Kya! Loved it!
I so eish it would accusly end like this TTwTT i didnt like that it ended eith emilXmarta in thr game so this was so perfrct for me!

wow its bean exactly 1 month since i last read this fanfiction...

i thought is was longer ..xD

can you please make a sequel..? or more chapters ... i and also the other readers would like it to read more of this story

thank you in advance

please update

Hey there :) I just wanted to let you know that you are a fantastic writer, and I urge you to keep developing and exploring writing :) I love how you moved the plot along and stayed so true to the characters! You have true skill, I can't wait to read more of your stories!

;~; thank you for finishing it! i didn't think i would live normally knowing that this beautiful piece of literature is unfinished.

The emotions i am feeling right now:

sadness because it ended. and because ratatosk's heart was broken when marta died ;~;

happiness because richter and emil are happy now

regret because this is like the second time i've commented xD should've commented more

fangirl-ness (that's an emotion?) because who doesn't like happy endings?

my heart hurting with all the emotions running through me.

;~; so beautifullllll ;~; i have run out of words...

THANK YOU~~~

do i hear a sequel comming this way ..?

please more chapters please please please

This is a beautiful end to this story. I... I love it. It's just... I love it.

I feel so bad for Ratatosk, losing Marta, but I feel bad for Emil who knows no one in this world but Richter.

Yet they have each other, and that's all they need.

It's just... I love it, I can't say that enough.

And I'm sad, too, to see such a wonderful story end, as all good things must.

You did a great job with the entire story, especially this last chapter-happy yet serious, melding into a more bittersweet ending.

So few multi-chap Richter/Emil stories out there, and I'm so glad to see this one finished instead of just being left as several have been.

You're a wonderful writer, perhaps you'll consider writing more for this pairing in the future.

Just... Great job. I just... I can't even. I have no more words to express what I feel here.

This chapter! I'm like, so happy they're together, but like so sad! D:

I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO FEEL.

But it's a great chapter, a really nice read, and I can't wait for the last part even though it makes me sad that it'll be over after that.

Teehe. Your introduction reminded me of when we were playing ToS1 and you made the same comment before we fought Mithos. We spent 15 hours getting as many titles as we could and having everyone master cooking and training to fight the Devils Arms guy, and by time we actually confronted Mithos, we were like, dude why hasn't he gotten away yet? We only gave him months to months to escape with Derris-Kharlan!

I love this chapter, by the way. Very emotional & raw with some sexy kissing at the end which is always good. But I've been waiting the most for the last chapter, so get that out ASAP because I am dyiiiingggg for Emil & Richter to be together with nothing in their way!

Another wonderful chapter, if saddening-but hey, don't worry! I'm horrible to characters, too. XD The more depressing the story, the better the happy ending if you give it one-and even if you don't, sad stories are good, too, you know?

Can't wait for more Richter, though, he's fun to read. :D

Did notice one typo-"the dakr and dangerous" you want "dark" I think.

:3

Looking forwards to the next chapter!

Now that you're almost done, I've finally started reading because you know I absolutely cannot wait for updates. Let me just say that I love, love, love this! You can be as depressing as you want because what you're doing is absolutely perfect. It's just how I imagine the game if it had my ideal Emil/Richter pairing & I love the focus on the question of Emil's idenity because that's one of the most fascinating parts of ToS2. Keep writing, because once again you have me hooked!

Heavy stuff goin' down in this chapter, but Zelos lightens things up with being himself. XD

I love Collette in this chapter, and Zelos, even though I normally hate him. I'm also quite amused by his hinting that Richter is the one Emil loves, and Marta being totally clueless. XD Poor Zelos, nobody understands what he's saying.

But I feel bad for Emil, having to decide like this... And how he was thinking that maybe it'd be best for himself to be erased, since Ratatosk loves Marta... And then poor Marta, in love with both but knowing only one returns those feelings...

But still a bit entertained by how she thinks it's another /girl/ who holds Emil's heart. XD