Lol I love good gender bender stories .

Boy, that part with CNN and video manipulation did not age well. I hope this story isn't dead.

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I have never in my life facepalmed so hard, I genuinely hate Xander, dude/dudette has no spine.

Do you intend to carry on with this story? eather way i was surprised by the way the story went tbh. I thought it would just be below mediocre like most fanfics. Was hoping for more evil doppelgänger moments but I still liked the fic. Keep up the great work!

"Floating in the air together, Karen looked at Irma. Her hair shone in the moonlight, and her eyes were very blue. They each reached out, each drew the other in, and they kissed there in sky above the clouds, and the faintly visible wings of the fiery Phoenix raptor enfolded them."

Uhoh. When the phoenix starts shipping, better get ready for timetravel babies.

so he doesnt know the fantastic 4 but some vage speech of dormammu rings a bell. this not even touching on the fact that there is nothing on how he came in this new world. and fuck if i dont hate the clueless manipulate me all you want routine

maybe put in your summary that its a genderbender, you the kind of thing you need to see a shrink for

Good concept except for one thing. Xander Harris would totally recognize many characters in the Marvel universe

In the words of the great Dragonball Abridged Vegeta "This is easily the greatest thing you've ever produced" Episode 49 00:03:37

and i'm confused as to why you dropped it

i seriously hoping your going for the Xander-Karen or Kara jumps into Divines body angle here that would be amusing

[We'll contact you within a week or two of your arrival there."] yer no one intelligent is going to work with a group that takes a week or two to recruit a single person that has already been located approached and offered the sales pitch(the hardest part) in fact the minute you arrive they should be ready otherwise they shouldn't have offered yet.

why does she not just fully power up? learning to restrain power is a complete waste of effort if your not yet fully charged because having to relearn how much strength won't kill a baseline human and all other combat from scratch

I hope you think about continuing this fic it's one of my favorites.

Couple things I wanted to comment on. I know this is an older story, but still figured I would comment. When everyone was getting on Karen's case about going to rescue Cessily, I think she should have pointed out that she used super speed to get there, and still only barely got there in time to rescue Cessily. So she didn't really have time to go tell a professor, and ONE and wait for someone to eventually arrive far to late to save Cessily or likely a number of other people.

Other thing is about Emma. Her whole thing about threatening to rewrite people's brains all the time, it wouldn't fly. Telepathy is one of those powers that are actually super terrifying for everyone who isn't a Telepath. That's because unlike say super strength, or energy beams or whatever, if a Telepath does something to someone, there is basically no way to know it unless your also a Telepath, and even then they would have to be looking. So the only way people can really trust a telepath is if the telepath is saint level good, like Xavier or Jean Grey. People who have never abused their abilities, never threatened to abuse their abilities and generally act as good people. Not saying that Xavier and others haven't done some off things, but they do it rarely, and they are almost never caught, so they give the appearance of sainthood.

Someone like Emma, who was a villain, and has shown herself to have questionable morals, would have to be super careful to not get lynched. Her running around threatening to rewrite peoples brains all the time? Eventually people would get paranoid enough that she is actually doing what she is threatening, that she would get lynched, or shanked or something. Unless several other telepaths were checking her on a regular basis. Even then she would need to be careful. Considering how often she lectures the kids about appearances, her actions and demeanor show that she doesn't think about it all that much, and the way she's been acting in this story, it would have already backfired against her.

This was excellent