Her message did get found, but I can’t imagine her captors were happy to learn she sent it...

And later on when Brutus and Nero. Get sparked they learned just how bad it was for Penny and decided revenge was in order for all of them...including Mr. Snoops

I enjoyed this story. She was a willful little thing. I love her spunk and I love those gators.

This is a well written addition to the story of Penny. Thank you for writing it.

Whew! Man that was a little violent. So there's an "In Trouble" series, hmm? I might check that out, I might not. Just wait, dear. But yeah... violent spanking there.

The characters are totally out-of-character... you have Penny colorless and somber, Medusa is tomboyish and delicate, Mr. Snoops zealous and ardent, Nero sophisticated and unconfident, and Brutus as naive and simple-minded! Penny thinks hate's a strong word and she'll never say it. Why do you have to make them so much like the characters in Despicable Me?

Please change the story wheras Penny is zealous and ardent{ Medusa is wild and pompous; Mr. Snoops is enthusiastic and hyper; Nero is confident and gullible; and Brutus is boastful and manipulative. That spanking was the most ironic scenes I ever seen and it certainly shows you don't understand the rescuers and that you get way too showy with it. Totally freaks me out.O_O

Okay, I just have one thing to say: I have never before even considered writing a flame, especially on one of your stories, but you drove me to it! What is making me write this flame? One word: spanking. I know you say that if we don't like the spanking, don't read it, but I'm just sick and tired of you writing stories that involve spankings! If you don't like what I'm saying, we can discuss it via PM. Let me also say that you have excellent skills as a writer and you can write things much better than these small spank-fics. I know because I follow your work quite closely. Please at least consider my advice.