| Reviews for Silver and red don't mix right? |
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MWSeraph chapter 1 . 2/9/2014 Hey, hiddensecret564, are you going to continue? |
MWSeraph chapter 20 . 10/19/2013 Are you going to finish this? |
MWSeraph chapter 20 . 9/4/2013 I would like to see a definitive ending, but I'm torn between the two choices. As an author, it's ultimately your call. |
TheNobody0 chapter 20 . 9/4/2013 Update! Update! Update! *continues chanting* |
MWSeraph chapter 19 . 8/19/2013 Thanks for telling us. I honestly was worried, but now I can wait. |
shingeki no kyoj chapter 19 . 8/19/2013 great story keep up the good work |
MWSeraph chapter 18 . 8/19/2013 Hello. I don't know if you will see this, but will you finish this story? Can you give us a heads up if you plan to continue this to the end? I would understand if you can't finish due to stress, but I would really like to see a beautiful ending! I encourage you to finish what you started! Good luck! |
DuelRoxas16 chapter 19 . 8/19/2013 Sorry to hear about your computer man, same yhing hapened to my desktop. turns out the harddrive went so i had to get a new one and lost all ny files. i cant wait for a new chapter soon |
MWSeraph chapter 18 . 7/24/2013 Looks like the fate of both bands hang in the balance at last. Will brotherhood, sisterhood, and romance prevail, or will Xemnas destroy the unity that has kept the two strong? I hope the two bands will prevail. I trust that you will bring a satisfying end to this wonderful story. Good luck, fellow writer. |
TheNobody0 chapter 18 . 7/22/2013 Awesomeness! Not mad as long as you update soon! |
WritersProse chapter 1 . 7/22/2013 I think the whole idea is very cute. Kairi and Naimine being sisters who are starting up a band is an adorable thought. At least from this chapter, however, there isn't a whole lot of real detail here. For example, you get to hear the girls play their songs, but I'm not really sure what makes some of them fantastic and what makes the others more 'meh'. It can be hard to write about music (believe me I know), but I think it would help the story if you found an angle that would illustrate the passion that these kids have for the art. Maybe that will happen in future chapters, I will just have to see. :) You do have my attention though. I'll read the next couple of chapters at the very least before making a final opinion. |
MWSeraph chapter 17 . 7/18/2013 You're doing fine, girl. Looks like Sora and Kairi really have some things other than their performance to think over. I can't wait to see what happens next! Honestly, I feel that the two would be more awesome if forged into one. Somehow, I have a feeling that their relationships would boost their morale and playing beyond everyone's expectations. Hope you continue to write well! |
TheNobody0 chapter 17 . 7/18/2013 That was very good. Keep updating. |
MWSeraph chapter 16 . 7/14/2013 Are you going to update soon? I do like this, and I would like to see a proper conclusion! |
MWSeraph chapter 16 . 6/1/2013 Thanks for updating, and nice chpater! So Red and Silver conspire together! I look forward to seeing them make Xemnas' plans go awry! |