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Very sweet story. But I felt very uncomfortable while reading Jackie through a harrowing experience. And also, the rest of the story went on like it never happened. Anyway, I enjoyed all the fluff and happiness.

Red was outside, saying goodbye to his chair...

Aww, that's sad.

"But... I think you're going to make a great teacher. And, for what it's worth, you would've made a decent husband, too."

More AWW!

"Any of you drops my kids I'll castrate you." Hyde said

I could hear Hyde saying that. *lol*

"Okay, camera... cam-era!" she sang, tripping down the stairs.

*lol* I like this image.

"Don't sound so surprised, Eric," Jackie said, "Steven is superior at everything."

LMAO

Hyde grinned with fake superiority at Eric.

I can definitely see that. Same smile as when Red said, "Eric, be more like Steven." *lol*

"Ooooh, dinner and a show..." Fez said happily.

LMAO Oy, Fez.

Another sweet Zen-rific story, Bunny! Like most of your stories, it leaves me hungry for more ('cause it's so enjoyable). I really like the vision you have for J/H, and maybe one day you'll write an EPIC Zen-story. D

Good Story

I'm Sad to see this end :(

Cute story

"Have this baby! It's gonna hurt!"

LOL Aww, Jackie...

we'll be more careful then, no more floor for you." Hyde nodded.

AWW! "No more floor for you"! Just like "No more stairs for you". D I like the follow-through.

Hyde walked out to the Visita Cruiser to see Donna lying on her back, staring at the stars.

"You used to do that when you were fifteen and waiting for Foreman." he reminded.

"Yeah, maybe I still am. Stupid, huh?"

I like this exchange. The idea that before Donna and Eric ever dated, she used to wait for him like that - it's really sweet. And now she's doing it, even though he's (so she thinks) in Africa.

your kid owe[s] me a new pair of alligator boots, Hyde. I'm a 13 wide.

LMAO Kelso *would* blame the baby...

"I want to see it come out!" Fez pleaded.

LMAO again.

I like the whole birthing scene, Bunny. I could feel the tension in it and Jackie's pain. And Mrs. Forman, of course, would be helping her through the birth. D Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good Chapter & More Please

Jackie and I are getting married.

Wow. He committed!

Jackie, meanwhile, dressed in her Snow Ball Gown,

That's a nice choice. D

It's practically a wedding dress itself, all beautiful and virginal white..."

"Jackie, you're knocked up!" Donna snorted.

LOL

surely Red wouldn't talk him out of it... I think..."

"He couldn't anyway." Jackie said confidently, her eyes shining.

Aww. *love*

"Eric doesn't need to know..."

Red, you keep doing that to Eric. Not nice! *lol*

Ooh, I wonder what Jackie and Hyde's vows will be...

Good Chapter & More Please

You have done so well with this story! Please don't through in a monkey wrench, Oh and by the the way, Eric could do better then Donna if he had more confidence !

Hyde placed a gentle hand over her belly. "Beulah..."

LMAO

"Son of a bitch..." Hyde said, getting up out of bed, not caring that he was still naked.

"Steven, wait..." she called, but he was already on his way down the stairs...

Ooh, I'm intrigued.

And, as always, I enjoy the love you have Hyde show Jackie.

You can't be here. No stairs for you."

Aww, he's so protective. :TinyBeatingHeart:

"I want to buy you a ring, but, I'd rather just get us a place."

He's got a good head on his shoulders. Far better use for that money.

"Our own place?" Jackie gasped, eyes lighting up. "That's even better than jewelry!" She suddenly blinked. "Oh, my God... who said that?"

LOL

Jackie nodded, her face aglow with a wide grin as he carried her to the couch like a princess wrapped in pink-and-white cotton sheets

That's a nice image. :D

But, she wasn't, and her efforts to keep her breasts under cover were to no avail.

Oh, crap. That's baaaad. Poor Jackie! :(

"That's not my wife. My wife's about two feet taller, blonde with some silicon bazingas."

LOL

Something in her tearful plea must've touched Larry, because he motioned for her to come closer to him as he handed an envelope to the kidnapper. Jackie ran to him, and he put an arm around her.

"Let's go..." he said, walking her out calmly...

Hmm... Has Jackie escaped the clutches of one spider to step into the web of another?

Kitty looked at the phone in shock for a moment before rushing into the den, where Steven had just five minutes before fallen asleep sitting up.

Nice in-character detail here. There's an episode where Hyde tries to fall asleep on Red's chair in the living room.

Hyde noticed he jingled when she landed, but said nothing. He rushed upstairs to Jackie's room; the door was locked, and he kicked the door in...

Jingling with all of Pam's jewelry.

"There are bruises..." he said, anger starting to flare in him. "They look like fingerprints almost..."

"Yes. The kidnapper got a little grabby," Jackie sighed.

He must have been squeezing really hard. OUCH!

"Steven, I told you- you deserve love, but so do I, Steven.

Ooh, very nice.

Bunny, I like how in all your stories it's a given that Hyde loves Jackie, that S8's characterization is just total B.S. I also wonder how Hyde's gonna react when Jackie tells him she's pregnant...

"I don't see how, and the fact that they made you a cop just reinforces my belief that law enforcement is flawed and stupid."

LOL Totally something Hyde could say.

"You're welcome. I figured I kinda owed you after trying to bang your chick and all..." Kelso said loftily.

LOL Oh, gosh.

"No one can hear you, Samantha." the man said

That is so creepy, him calling Jackie "Samantha" all the time.

Suddenly, Jackie felt very helpless, but her stomach was screaming out for food- the baby inside demanded it. Food now, Mommy!

Yeah, her kid. Man, what would being drugged like that do to the fetus? *yikes*

"Fez!" Donna snapped. popping Jackie's hand and then his. "Pregnant, Jackie. No booze! Do you want your baby to end up like a Kelso? I mean, that's half what's wrong with them- Mrs. Kelso drinks more than your mom and keeps popping 'em out."

"Yes, Hyde once said he bet her breast milk was like Bailey's Irish Creme." Fez giggled.

LOL

A leather purse with a large ornate "J" carved on it, and a tiny grassopper right underneath. He'd gotten it for her birthday

Nice details. I really see this purse.

"Listen, Mac, cute little brunette, big ole Bambi eyes, looks like she couldn't have possibly really come from this town." Hyde said. "Probably had one of those little fruity drinks with an umbrella."

This is great, descriptive dialogue.

Every sound was like she was hearing it from the inside of a glass jar, and every sight was as if she was looking through that jar.

Ooh, terrific images.

"Now, Miss Samantha, you need to calm down. Your husband will pay to get you back; you know you're one of his favorite trophies."

Awesome! You went with that idea. :D

The man's face moved closer, and a tongue flicked out to lick the tear streaming down her cheek. She wanted to cringe, to shudder in revulsion, but she couldn't... Whatever had happened to her had rendered her completely paralyzed somehow.

Definitely worried on Jackie's behalf, here.

"No. You're a hangover that won't go away.

LOL Nice burn!

Bunny, I really like the emotional conflicts Jackie and Hyde are experiencing. I'm always right there with J/H in your stories. :D Looking forward to seeing how this continues.

"Of course it's yours, you bastard!" she yelled at Imaginary Steven in the corner. "I haven't been with anyone else since the first time you kissed me!" LOVED this - good way to vent without injuring anyone!

Liked how the scene sequed way into the song song lyric:

Suddenly, the man knocked over his keys, and made a grunting noise as he attempted to retrieve them. "Damn sciaticia..."

Jackie frowned. Poor old guy... she thought to herself.

"I'll get them for you," she offered, and reached down to get them. When she did, he slipped two pills quickly into her frothy little drink...

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