Wonderful story. I loved the angst. Very well written. I think you really nailed the characters. Great job!

Wow. loved this XD

damn this was good! I'm not very good at posting reviews but I just wanted to say that I loved it :D

Whoa, I could actually see this happening in the actual storyline. That takes talent. Nice job.

Amazing, just stunning and the scene with Lucifer and Sam at the creek, chillingly awesome.
:3

The ending made me smile :) And Lucifer was chilling as always.

This... was just... amazing.

Seriously. Everything about it was absolutely perfect and I loved it. I could see the characters and hear their voices and it fit so wonderfully with the show it really could've been a missing scene. I really loved the way you described everything, the way you wrote the dialogue between Sam and Lucifer.

The way you described the way Sam was feeling inside, all his doubts and thoughts and insecurities and the self-loathing. Just fantastically written.

I loved this so much! Brilliant work!

Poor Sam, his pain was palpable.

Wow, that was amazing! And so emotional, so intense... your Lucifer gave me the creeps, I've got goosebumps all over. You wrote him so well. It's sad that Dean doesn't know what happened to Sam while he wasn't around, he'd be devastated. I totally loved it!

Your Lucifer was fab-amundo!

I love this line: "So, uh, listen, man. Earlier, I, uh…I made a pretty big friggin' mistake, and…uh, I think we should meet up." There was no anger in his tone. No bitterness. Just the slightly awkward, sheepish, hopeful tone Dean usually reserved for when he was trying to spit out some sort of apology.

I felt like this was part of the episodes. It fit like a glove.

Thank you,

Karen

Been dying to read this and now here I am...yahoo!

Love this line: A sudden grip on his shoulders pulled him backwards before he could overbalance and fall.

"Oh, don't speed things up on my account," the voice drawled. "By all means, take your time. Count your regrets. Say your goodbyes to this cruel world."

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I could feel Sam's guilt...well done.

And his 'old lady' car...LOL...loved that bit of humor

And now on to chapter two.

Karen

Wow, great story! Very unique and well-written. Well done! :)

great job with Lucifer! He gave me chills as I was reading.

You wrote Lucifer really well, almost chilling with the things he said. It's almost sad that Dean has no idea what had been going on. Of course he was having his own little trip to deal with also.

This was the bestest. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it you crazybeagle you! D