revenge (Evily said)

Great oneshot, I felt bad for Ron and Kim, keep up the good work!

Great one-shot with an intriguing yet sad ending I thorughly enjoyed it. Oh and in respons to one of your statements in Mirrored Reflections I do always read A/N's...v

Who knew Dr. D was so bloodthirsty? Then again, he does come up with schemes that continually put the lives of a couple of teenagers at risk. I alwasy though it was Shego who'd want Kim's head on a platter most of all. Without Ron, Kim is pretty much done. One thing I have to ask, where was Rufus in all this? He usually turns the tide to their favor.

~Darev

Wow...

I've seen you take the angsty route before, and I know you're good at it, but this hit new levels.

Like Kim, I felt utterly gut-punched when it happened. And I don't know if I've ever seen a better assessment of what it might be like if she went through that.

You, sir, have a dark gift.

Keep up the good writing. : )

A.G.

Wow, this is one sad story.

Poor Kim, for losing Ron like that.

Then again, should she manage a reboot (even a temporary one) Shego is dead.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w

Sniff! So sad... Nice work! _

Sometimes something grim is called for. We all know that its the synergy that makes Team Possible work...without that, the villains win...but this could easily be enlarged upon, since we also all know that if a cartoon character falls out of sight, they can always return! Ron could start playing mindgames with his "killer", appearing unexpectedly in various places, and just as quickly vanishing...

Dark? Tragic? Yes. But sometimes even that very fact can shock a jaded villainess, which is indeed what happened. Ron may rest in peace, and Kim will eventually recover from her tragic loss, but Shego won't. Ever.

And to me, that poignant fact may be the greatest tragedy.

MA

Wow - that was kind of a downer. I'll avoid the whole 'that never happened in the show' thing and simply take it for what it is. It did capture the sudden and totality of death pretty well (though who's to say Ron didn't survive since you didn't have a 'recover the body' scene...?) When it hits, it's sudden bereavement, and all the being and personality that was there is suddenly not there anymore. I felt for Kim. It's a tough thing to face.

The only thing that may have been a little off is Shego not pouncing on Kim's sudden weakness. In 'StD' she wasn't above taunting Kim after Eric's betrayal, and his subsequent melting. This may have been a bit different, but TV show Shego always pressed an advantage when she had one...

This was probably, the worst, cruelest thing Shego has ever done to Kim.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Should clearly add on and bring Ron back since all he did was disappear over the edge. .

Man that was dark, but I guess you can't stop a wild idea once it's on the move. Did enjoy it though even though a character death is always a bit hard to handle. I can't believe how much I choked up and couldn't stop thinking "VENGANCE FOR THE FALLEN!" still great story though.

It's not that far off your norm Whitem and it's complete too which means that Ron IS gone unless you have a twist later and Kim will have to learn to deal with this.

Larry (Sentinel 103)

Sad ending, hope Kim is not possibly alone.

And you might have something to do with that, too...

Curse you one-way plot bunny!

CB73