I liked this so much! well writtent, so exitingly and funny! thanks

I really really enjoyed this! I would love a sequel ;)
Thanks for writing!

This is awesome! I love that you didn't use the popular sarcastic Hawke, this is a refreshing take on their dynamic that we don't always see in these fics. I love how you write, perfect grammar and everything. Love love. One of my fav femhawke/isabela fics ever. You're awesome.

This was brilliant!

Line that made me laugh most was aveline "If you can call having your soul sucked out kissing"

Isabela had to have been my favourite thing about Dragon Age 2. Never thought of reading fics about her and FemHawke. Nice :D I never played a mage mind you. But I love the playful dynamic here. I think you captured the characters charmingly.

Poor Aveline. lol. made me laugh and giggle with those lines coming from Isabela.

Very well written; great job on this.

Nice one Hawke, and I did recognize the line from the song.

This must be one of the best DA2 one-shots I have read so far! great idea, that was awesomely written! :D

You should write an ending to this

How refreshing! This was cute and fun!

I really enjoyed the wonderful balance you managed between humor and the more serious aspects of Hawke and Isabela's relationship and the game between them at the beginning - what a fantastic idea. You had me on the edge of my metaphorical seat during its progression and you managed to not only keep our favorite pirate in character, but your 'uptight' champion as well.

Aveline and Varric (and their bet) were PRICELESS. Varric, and this is simply undisputed, is and always WILL BE da MAN. Silly guard captain: never bet against Izzie when seduction or sex is involve.

In short, I loved this - every bit of it. I'd very much like to see more from you with these two. :)

Th-that was funny, witty and cute at the same time! And damn, it was so gooood!