| Reviews for Mr Xavier |
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   I.C.2014 chapter 4 . 9/18/2015 This is sick. And the mother just acts like she doesn't notice what's going on. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/6/2015 Awesome! Please update soon! |
| Silvana chapter 4 . 3/26/2014 YOU DO NOT LEAVE THIS STORY HANGING AT THIS MOMENT! IT'S JUST PLAIN CRUEL! :( |
| Deminos chapter 4 . 12/8/2011 It's really good, write what you want and follow your own mind. Advice from others is good but remember that you write for yourself. X3 Can't wait for more. |
| XxRazorgirlxX chapter 4 . 10/30/2011 LOVE IT! PLZ KEEP WRITING ! |
| karmapolice28 chapter 4 . 10/9/2011 WOAH SHIT! that was brilliant my dear, thanks for listening to my suggestions! still a huge fan, this chapter was win. i especially love the fact that you made charles get aroused by choice and made erik really get into character. i know you said you were in a bit of a rut so...more suggestions? *maybe erik and charles explore the ds role,and charles is flabbergasted because he enjoys it and its the first time he's done it without being scared the person in question would put him in the hospital *maybe erik starts slow and sweet because in the back of his mind he's still sympathizes for charles, but charles is like "i want you in me now, hard, and fast" because he knows erik is different and will treat him well *maybe you could focus on erik focusing on charles' pleasure; making him come more than once (charles being shocked that anyone would care enough to worry about his pleasure) idk its 2am here lol hope that helps :) i'll be looking out for the next chapter! |
| PrincessJim4.0 chapter 4 . 10/1/2011 omg so hottt! here are some ideas for your story :D go to your messages k |
| Lunetta The Wind Goddess chapter 4 . 10/1/2011 Oh no no no! Don't feel like this isn't good, its fantastic! Please continue, I love how direct Erik is in this story. And James, oh so young, yet they both want it! XD Though the fact that his Dad is listening? DX Bleck! But, the fact that we can listen? XD Awesome. This is great writing, please don't give up on it. I am greatly enjoying the plot and everything about it! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
| realityfling18 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011 Love it! |
| TheWistfulWriter chapter 4 . 9/28/2011 Hey! Glad you updated! I was missing the story! I wrote a chapter a few days ago building off you're chapter 2, you should check it out. Maybe it'll give you some ideas. |
| MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 4 . 9/27/2011 oh wow just wow nice i love it great |
| TheWistfulWriter chapter 3 . 9/24/2011 Yeah, I second Lunetta! I'm more than happy to help! I'm so anxious for another chapter! |
| Lunetta The Wind Goddess chapter 3 . 9/12/2011 I hope there will be more, let me know if you get stuck or want some help with ideas, I'd LOVE to help! , |
| Lunetta The Wind Goddess chapter 2 . 9/12/2011 Ok! :D |
| Lunetta The Wind Goddess chapter 1 . 9/12/2011 A new version of Erik coming to the rescue! |
