Really love this story so far plz continue it and update soon!

So far, so good!

Awesome chapter and you just writing about how Dawn, May, and Misty left brings back sad memories.

Wow this is great. This is definatly turning into my kind of story. Look forward to further updates.

Awsome story update soon. I can't wait to see more.

Wow I can't wait for more, your writing style is awesome you don't have any gramatical errors. I may be a little biased since I love advance shipping there a few great stories of this pairing. I believe your story has a chance. Can't wait for the next update.

I can't wait to see what happens next or how May comes in! Update soon!