Reviews for Piece of Heaven
Deactivated00424649 chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Waaah, call me twisted but I liked this xD

Your dark Yama is better than mine! Wish I had thought of those things for him to say during my last chapter!

Anyways, more dialogue from Goku would've been neat (I think it's because somewhere deeply seeded, I'm a masochist xD) during their whole exchange but it is so rare to find in character fics especially ones like these. But you did an amazing job for being as short as it was. I really liked it!
NicoleBL chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
ohh my goooshh how terrifying 0_0! .. but ADORABLE! I just love this kind of Yamamoto x3!
I'm wondering now.. what they reaction would be against eachother the next day? x) .. will hayato be scared or mad or what haha xp.. I hope there was a sequel :)
RoxanneTheGreat chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
O.o Whoa...
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
This... is scary!

*rolling around on the bed and laugh so hard*

Oh God! Yamamoto is so possessive! He is the King of Possessive Lover! BUT I LOVE IT!

His Love to Hayato is too strong! And scary but I LOVE IT!

KYAAAAAAAAA! XDD I LOVE YOU POSSESSIVE YAMAMOTO TAKESHI TO GOKUDERA HAYATO!

8059 FOREVER!
Daylite chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Quite a good fic i've read in quite... a long, long time.

I like your way of writing this story, though it's a little short for me.

I don't think this story needed to be beta-ed. It flows just nice.

Great job.
JaX chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
This is defintely the sexiest most well written yaoi I've read about these two amazing characters. Great job!
Tsumitami chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
this is too hoooot...
MizuKeyLabilzzz chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
It's really sexy and hot!

I don't know what have i to say or comment in this fic.

I just speachless and i can't , the statment Yamamoto's use so perfect and sexy for me.

I'm sorry if my language so i'm not fucking great in english.

Make story about them again ok.I requested Senpai...
Rakiestiel chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
I loved it! It really shows Yamamoto's possessive side! :3
KucingPerak chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Oooh! this is great.

I like Yamamoto in here. so possesive yet so cool. I like Gokudera too.

Hey, continue this one,ok?

or can u make another yamagoku fic with their personalities like this?

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Great fic! *four thumbs up*
ChibiDem chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Yamamoto's different side. WOW. i liked it a lot. Poor Gokudera.