This was really good! I enjoyed how Vegeta’s character progresses throughout the story. I’m glad she finally said yes to the man and Vegeta let her bite him...lol. They seem pretty content now. Really great read, thanks.

"No thank you, I'm already married to a tart". It's AWESOME

I’m only on chapter 2 and I’m laughing a lot at vegetas POV and the courting. Love it!

OMG this was sooo f***ing good, really!

Oh i loved it! I loved the point of view in vegeta side hahaha congratulations it was... acceptable hahaha

I AM THE PROPER BIRTHING POD!
FUCK IT IM DEAD!

Ahh what a great story! A few artistic liberties, but I don't think you diverged from the canon too much. A fresh perspective :P I loved Bulma's parents! Your humour is very charming, VegBul conflicts were genuine and believable, making the resolutions satisfying to read, your smut is tasteful and hot! Excellent read, thank you _

Loved it!

This isnt cannon at all! But it is good.

Sexy! Vegeta is so clueless.

omg. funniest chapter yet. poor vegeta :))

Loved this stayed up all day and night to finish.

I really enjoyed reading your story. The idea was fresh and it was loaded with funny moments. :D

heeeellll yeahhh

I read this entire story in one sitting and it was simply brilliant! Absolutely loved your writing and thoroughly enjoyed your characterisation and humour! Can't wait to read some of your other works!