Awesome story!

I liked it :)

I'm sorry but that was a complete bitch move on Abby's part

love this story thank you Judy H

love the Justin bieber dissing he should be arrested for crimes against the eyes and ears

So this chapter made me think on how it would be to have sex in a coffin... I mean it seems like it would be pretty cramp... Now I want to try it lol. Thanks for the idea author.

Omg, I was dying from my laughter at all the Mc-Nicknames. Loving the story so far.

Oh nice, you introduced me to a term for NCIS archive section that I never heard of before... Labby. Loving the story so far, even if I'm only at chapter 2.

I loved this so much! Ninja assasian seems like a pretty good name for Ziva - I just have one thing to say. At the beggining of this story didnt you say that you hated 'Tabby' and that you could barley see 'McGiva' if you squinted hard and spun around. Just saying(: Anyways! Love it, great story!

this was a real good story.

Actually, I don't think Tony came off as a jerk at all. I know my boyfriend does the same thing when I string excuses for too long. He, and Tony, just get frustrated with being patient. While it's not canon Tony's response, it is a believable one given the situation.

I do also understand why Abby is hesitant to tell McGee.

The shortness of the chapters can either be a good thing, or not. I think it works here, given that the Pairing isn't your usual.

Good story, overall, and I will continue reviewing as I think is relevant. I also admire giving a new Pairing a try!

Lois (my email, if you'd like to reply: 333 )

Just read the whole thing...took me almost 3 days. Loved it! Great job with all sides of the story. :D

Very intense emotions... :(
At least they're over the worst...

Great job all the way through! :) thanks for this really sweet story.

enjoyed the end a McNozzo wedding was great