I loved this story

This deserves so many more reviews! This story is so captivating and drew me in each chapter, each one more than the rest! I wish this could be continued but it would kill the magic of it and it would only drag it out, but this has been one of the best stories I have ever read, even one that have been published and sold!

This was an awesome stoy! I loved it! THANKS!

this is amazing!
just perfect!
you write amazing!

Great story! Sort-of confusing sometimes but i understood in the end(:

Amazing fic. I really enjoyed reading it.

Awesome and original story! Well done :)

I read this story a couple of months ago and have just realised that I failed to review on it. Blaspheme!

Okay, seriously, this was a very original piece and I loved it. The storyline was brilliantly thought out and delivered in a manner which did it proud.

Thank you sooo much for sharing this.

lovely story til nw

TOLD YOU I WASNT DONE! when violet(love the name by the way) came back for the last time and bella ran with the knife with edward following her i bust out crying! It really touched me that he wanted to be woth her even in death. It really reminded me of romeo and juliet that way. Im glad he finally remembered what her name was before everything could go down the drain! Anyway i just wanted to say this story was awesome. Youve really touched me as a reader andi hope to see more from you soon!(you have also made my favorite story list!)

Wow! That is the only thing that came to mind after reading it! now in the begining it sounded more like an over view for a bedtome story which was nice. Now when we got to the birth i was kind of confused as to was sue the one that carried her and then put her on the water or was she just born from the water. Now i love that you gave her "powers" that didnt make her normal. It followed twilight and ofcourse new moon to a tee. I myself was so excited for the dance scene and was sad that it was ruined by jessica.(i never liked her or tanya) i was surprised that you didnt put more of the cullen family in the story. You kind of let them do theor own thing. Which is very different for a twilight story. I loved that bellas blood could cause so much trouble. But i was also confused as to how edward got her blood on his tounge. I didnt like that billy was so defiant that he was willing to put his sons life on the line as well as 3 other people! (to be continued!)

I am so glad you showed me this chapter. I often read stories and in my mind devise different things going on than what the author writes and especially endings. I just haven't written and probably won't but I am so happy to know that I am not the only one who thinks and thinks and comes up with different parts in the story. I can't change other stories but I probably would change one of my own just like you do.

I am still sniffling. This is turning out just perfectly. I am glad Rene got to go back and have a loving marriage with Charlie.

Very good story.

Oh No this is so sad. I can't believe that they found each other only to die...tissues please

No matter how you planned it, it turned out wonderful!