lmao i’m glad you got sidetracked! this was perfectly cute c:

Haha! Nobody messes with Kats twix! (Same goes for me) and the fact that she would kiss hale for it! GENUIS! (Then again, I would make out with hale anytime for anything if I had the chance.)
Just on thing:

When it says:

Angus wiggled his eyebrows. "Need some alone time with your boyfriend? Gonna go make out?"

I think that just should have said, "Gonna make out?" It just seems more... Bagshaw-ish. You know?

Crappy raesoning ?! This was brilliant! :):)

I loved this! Since it's not complete, does that mean you may continue? Cause that would be cool... Just saying... :)

Blessings,

bookdiva

hahahahahahahaha i can totally imagine that !
you should do Kat/Hale oneshots cause you are good at them :)
AND I LOVED UNCOMMON CRIMINALS !

hahaha the chocolate thing was so cute!

i love it! :)

Cool!

Nice and funny! Loved it!8)

haha this was really good! I thought Kat would've liked Kit-Kat,though.

sweet

Oh my gods,i loved it to pieces,they're so cute~!adorable

That was great! Awesome job! And so cute :) You wrote it really well. And I love Twix, too. :D I though Uncommon Criminals was awesome, and I started laughing at the simple solution in the end. xD Anyway, keep writing!

So cute! Good job :D

Gah, this was adorable and I don't mind the OOC-ness to it. I've read some stories where it's just a completely different character. So don't worry bout it!

And I totally know what you mean! As a girl we all have our secret stashes of chocolate. Mmmm, just thinking about it makes me hungry ;)

anyways, great story, and it was very perfect. Loved the ending since that seemed very Hale-ish and I liked how you included the rest of the crew up above.