Reviews for This Is How The World Ends
Sas chapter 4 . 11/20/2016
Where is chapter 4
Guest chapter 3 . 8/1/2016
It's awesome please make more
LE'Capitan chapter 4 . 9/13/2011
NOOOOooo! ROACH! Wish he didn't die... Ah well, so it goes, right mate? Looking foreword to next chapter, please post soon. Are you psyched about new game? I can't wait! Hope they bring back my fave, ghost, or at minimum his voice actor to carry on tradition... We'll see...
tinyartsy chapter 4 . 9/8/2011
Im not being horrible or anything but why did u kill Roach cus he was like ghosts little brother i dont think you should of killed him. I liked your story until then ..
Liontalon chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
Hey like i said it's your story do what you want with it and it was a good chap. cant wait for the next :)
TarTarIcing chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
Seems like a peaceful chapter... I like it!
The Drunk Fisherman chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
( Thumbs Up )
Liontalon chapter 3 . 9/7/2011
i like how you wrote this chap. and i think Roach should just make it i mmean come on Roaches can survie almost anything, but its your choice and i'll still like the story no matter what happens :)
The Drunk Fisherman chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
You did it again man... good stuff, dont know whether roach should live or not...thats your decison, a tough one too

keep writing
TarTarIcing chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
I'd like how you cut straight to Ghost's arrival. I might sound evil, but I want Roach to die and romance to happen between that doctor and Gaz...

Other than that, keep it up!
Mirai M. Mieux chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
Whoa, sooo different to see this kind of story-I like it!

And you're right, Gaz is kinda forgotten...

I miss Gaz...
The Drunk Fisherman chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Great story, bout time Gaz got his due
TarTarIcing chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
I definitely liked how you kept Gaz in character upon meeting Makarov. He still has his bite and his cool, even when there's the eventual rage shots. Makarov is also kept slimy, that he'll take any conditon to get whatever he needs done. I expect to see the tension and what happens next!
Liontalon chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
its good, and really good for your first story, hope you update soon :)
TarTarIcing chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
I actually like this. I can see that you've done your research and that you didn't do anything that I would see impossible. I myself am a Gaz fan and the fact they are brothers doesn't add up to me (I did them as cousins).

The brain damage bit is also a plus here and the fact that Gaz is older is one too.

It's a good start. Can't wait to hear more from you.