Great story! Update soon! And make your chapters longer with more dialouge

Nice chapter, the dream at the beginning sounds a bit like the ones in ME3. :)

It'll be interesting to see how the rest of this goes with the Council.

Hey dude, nice to see you again. No new chapter, eh? That's okay. I understand your plight. I'm a college student myself. That shit is tiring.

Oh, man, I would really love to write my own take on your idea, but I'm a slower writer than you are. :P So... I don't think that would help.

Well, either way, I'm glad you're not giving up on this fic. I'm really looking forward to whatever you dish out next.

Oh, hey, I just thought of another question. Will there be any pairings?

Well things don't always go as planned, looking forward to whatever updates you do put up though. :)

Another excellent chapter, dude. Very good. I can't find any real complaints on this chapter. So... keep it up!

Hmm, so Link seemed to get part of the vision.

Ooh, new bad guy with Saren as well. Very intriguing. :)

Woo, you're back! Alright, I really enjoyed this chapter. Especially the part at the end where Link whips out his Omni-Sword and starts wrecking some shit up. If I had to point out a flaw, I would have to say the part in the middle with all the in-game dialogue was a bit dry. But, it's not that big of a deal. It was still enjoyable. So, I take it your Shepard will be paragon?

Hmm, very nice. :)

Glad to see you got back on track with this story, and believe me I know your pain when it comes to college work! Keep up the awesome work!

I like what you've done so far, I'll look out for more. :)

Woot! New chapter! It's interesting to see Link converse with other people for once. And "Omni-Sword" sounds like it will be great. Everything else looks like it's going fine. I can't wait to see what's coming up next.

Also, woo! You used the name I suggested! I feel so honored.

Great idea for a story! Omni-blade newest form of the Master Sword? Keep up the good work and all that stuff.

This can become a good story.

One thing why not femshepXlink?

Well, I can say that, so far, it's a lot better than some other fics I've read. Some people don't know how to properly write a sentence, but so far the grammar and punctuation is pretty much flawless. The amount of game dialogue you can't really do much about, unless you plan on completely changing the games story. Normally I like longer chapters, but they're usually long only because of useless details I could care less about.

Also, I usually read long fics. Just wondering how long you estimate this fic will be. (in terms of words, not chapters, if possible)

Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update. The idea of Link in the Mass Effect universe is piquing my curiosity.

(PS: Think you can explain what an Omni-Sword is?)

Very Interesting conecpt!

Keep it Up! :)

PS

I would normally write a longer comment, but it is currently 1:58:32 AM