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You better update this story soon! It's better than the actual game!

I'm not trying to criticize, but it was a little cliche. Still, nonetheless, it is an amazing story. I really hope you decide to continue it. I totally can't wait until the next chapter! x3

Please don't quit on this Story please! I love this version and don't give up on your creation! Who care's if they don't give reviews instantly? these things take time... DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR WORK CAUSE IF YOU QUIT ON YOUR WORK, YOU ARE QUITING ON YOURSELF! Continue on what you think is RIGHT!

I'm so sorry I didn't read this earlier but I have been kinda busy.

Anyway: whatever you do, DO NOT QUIT THIS STORY. It's awesome.

And if you want, I can recommend this in my story. Not that it is immensely popular but you never know, right?

Sydney you is a liar. You don't own me, my parents do ( at least for 2-3 more years :P )

This was a really cool chapter! Please don't end it just because people don't review. If I ended New Girl when people didn't review, I wouldn't have gotten to chapter 16, and you wouldn't end up in my story. You just got to give people time to find it :)

If it helps I can recommend this when I update New Girl.

hahaha, the first person to review. *fist bumps air* I win!

Yea I is in your story, you is an awesome buddie Syd!

That chick was a mega bitch, I can imagine her with a British accent. :P

Can't wait for more! Loves you :)