Fantastic job on this story.

So i've read this twice over now and i am so intrigued by this story. I've tried to dissect it and figure out what the message is behind it and i think i get it finally. it's amazing how masterfully made this story is hinting everywhere at the message and if you go back and look at it carefully, everything comes together.

but i still have one last thing i've not figured out. i don't know the symbolism behind latios's eyes. in the story latias calls them crimson but in quotations, meaning it's her commenting on the past, she says it reminds her of blood. the first reference latias says "so much like pools of blood, how didn't you realize that. the signs were all there even", suggests that whatever it means is obvious ,but it's not obvious to me. i would just conclude it's talking about his impending death, but i just feel like it's mentioned way too much throughout the rest of the story to just be for his end.

wish i could know from you what you meant by the eyes but that uncertainty makes the story that more interesting. fantastic job on this story.

Masterfully written! That is all that I can say! This has certainly become one of my true favorite stories!

This is freaking amazing. I love you.

Flippin amazing! And also D'awwwwwwwww :D
Keep up the good work!

Beautiful!

where is the song?

Sad but uplifting in the end, this story is a remarkable piece of poetry and prose mixed together beautifully with emotional depth and love.

I think that this was a great piece of work. I like the diffent time skips. All in all, this was definatly 30 minutes of my life that I haven't actually wasted. Good job

-HWN

Great thing here dawn, loved it:) I like the format you used for the story, letting us see into what was Latias and Latios, and then coming to where it's Latias getting with Rayquaza:) can't stop smiling at how this is a nice love story:) well you made my day dawn, thank you:)

Well, I liked it. I really like how you did the before and after part. That was new. It's good.

Well, you definitely did not go overboard. I loved it. It was depressing (as in, really depressing) but it was great. The tense and POV made it even better. Maybe you should continue to write in this format. I really hope to see another story from you (and the others that you've already written for this fandom are likewise great).