Bad Vinnie, lol. Thank you for such a wonderful story within a story!

I loved that Neal or Nick saved the princess!

This is a great ending for a great story! Love your way to resolve the treasure mess and El’s kidnapping and ...peter asking Neal to tell him a story (and the story itself) is so very cute and moving!

Your story is amazing, smart and oh so very lovely!
The idea of Peter proposing Neal to tell a story is ...brilliant!
thank you so much!

Hey,

I just wanted to say that last sentence was really heart-warming . . . Such a Goode ending!

-Marty

i like this version of possibilities :)

Nice! Poor Neil getting shot, but I liked Nick and Petey's reconciliation.

What a fairy tale!
the letter is really sooo mozzie. could hear his voice reading it.
Neal asking if he confessed anything was just..they should adapt it in the
show ;) after they ask you for premission, of course. ;)
Good work!

glad that even mozzie seems to be heading home...
and i agree, the dreams of all of them changed over the time. could say that's a good thing...

gotta love the fairy tale here!

wow what a start! even though i already watched the ep, i'm soooo curious to find out how you saw things...

I liked the story :) It was really touching and more importantly, I think that aside from capturing Neal's youth, it reveals the good man he really is under the con.

OMG terribly awesome story here. The ending melt my heart completely

A very pleasing resolution to the whole treasure fiasco, well played :)

This was a fun ride, with lots of twists and turns!

This bit made me smile a lot:
"Well, they've got you on some pretty good drugs."
"Have I confessed to anything?"

That's just such a Neal response! :)

What a wonderful story, I loved it so much, thank you very much!

Keep writing stories, they are some of the best!