Reviews for Children of Primus series, 2: The Gathering Storm
creativesm75 chapter 6 . 1/3/2011
nice fanfic
firebird234 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
I love this story.
Megs Rulz chapter 6 . 5/2/2006
THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! It's the best one on this entire site! You are an awesome writer! Keep writing!
Kokiri chapter 6 . 10/16/2003
This story was great! The part in Ch. 5, about the 'guide' being Orion Pax, that just blew me away! Cool idea. I've also read the first story in your 'Children of Primus' series, and thought it was amazing, too. I love the way you write. I'm off to read Part 3 now!
j32 chapter 6 . 12/29/2002
Do I need to tell you how much I love you're fics?: Awsome though.I hope you write more TF.
kidu chapter 6 . 4/22/2002
Gripping. I'm looking forward to reading the third in the series. I also like the way you've taken care with the characterization of your background characters... Cyclonus, Magnus, Soundwave... even with the Primes and Megatron being most of the story. Details, gotta love 'em.