Nice one-shot, enjoyed it very much! A light Minato/Kushina story directly from canon with a bit more details.. been looking for something like this haha :)

i'm glad i finally read a story that follows canon for minakushi but i think you could give more details rather than just "copying and pasting" from the manga? make it more interesting :)

That is so sweet. This is the first time actually read it. Great job!

when I opened this story i was more expecting this to be set just after the savour and have that more detailed but i guess that fabricating something completely from scratch would be hard to do.

love it

OMG, I loved this!

What a great expansion on a small part from the manga. I loved that scene and this was a beautiful additive.

The playground fight was awesome, and good old Sarutobi was all nice and dandy, I love that guy. :)

One small critique though:

After the one kid calls her a bloody habanero and you change scenes, a line separator would really help the readers know the scene is changing. I know I was a little confused at first.

All in all, I loved this. It reminds me of a Shakespearean love story, tragic and beautiful till the end.

Bravo, my friend, hopefully and ego well-stroked. ;P

So lovely they are when they meet. I can imagine Kushina doing that to the kid x)

Yeah, so great chapter. I will follow you and add your fanfic to story alert

Nice job :)

Excellent work i love the part where sh "convinces" them to change her nickname XD