LMAO I loved this fic. Thanks for this. Now imma stalk your profile see if you';re hiding any more good fics.

lol oh this is best just love family moments of Roy, Riza, the brothers and the Mustang
love like the parents (Roy & Riza) notice that was something wrong befor first before others
and how Ed just acts like son to a Dad

can you do more like this

Tho. This wath funny to read XD
The word excused has an s though. May I leave or go might be better since Ed is avoiding that.

lol sooooo ffffuuuunnnyyyy

this was so cute and I loved it :)

Now Ed mu2t alway2 wriite liike thii2. XD

I was about to die when Roy said, "Thut up, Fullmetal." That was funny. :D

...Oh goodness... poor Ed XD

Ahhhhahaha it was hilarious. LOVELY!

Oh, I love this story, it's completely adorable and funny! :)

hahaha! I loved it! Brilliant! Edd would do that just to spite him and I love the last line. keep up the good work!

Funny! Love it! It's so cute!

Thats utterly hilarious! You know I just got the Brotherhood OVA collection and it one part theres a Roy rap so when you said 'the Mustang' I immediatly thought about it.

Aww. Cute story and well written _ I could see this scene happening in the anime if Ed ever got his tongue pierced!

Hahaha very funny and creative!

But one problem. In this line: "May. I. Be. Excused. Right. Now. Colonel. Jerk face" There is an 's' sound in 'excused' and 'face' Just a little problem i noticed there. 'sides that, it's hilarious! :D