You basically made Naruto into a bitch. Go fuck yourself, "author". Take your pretentious bullshit, and have whore mother choke on it. In fact, have your limp cocksucking father choke on it, too. You worthless piece of trash.

Naruto is a little bitch

You not only added more comedy into it, but just made naruto 1,000 times scarier than before
And what he did to haku , that's just 'scary'! Haku doesn't deserve that!

thats to bad

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So gaara is also Ean empath

3/5

Is it Karin or c

The fact that you're choosing to ignore is that unlike you, Naruto has empathic abilities. We wouldn't feel the hatred of those we hate whenever they come around us. Naruto would be consistently subjected to it on a daily basis.

Well, that's a shame to see that notice. Still, thank you for writing this story up to this point. I loved it. One of the best Naruto stories I've read and even though it's discontinued, it was a great journey.

Jouton is a very interesting concept you came up with. I absolutely loved your characterization of Naruto in this. And Sasuke's mission - finally! No more stupid Sasuke that was canon.

Just amazing.

Thank you for writing this. If you ever decide to come back to it, I'll be reading. :)

Fuck that it's tsunade

Karin?

you shocked me with this.

so you ignored ino or sakura in the mission when they were available. even tenten who is competent if youre looking for that was ignored.

i disagree that sakura surpasses her mentor. if theyre at the same level tsunade is stil lbetter because of genetics.

you forgot ino and tenen... its a bit sad theyre left out.