| Reviews for Moving On |
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ObsessedRHShipper chapter 1 . 5/16/2018 Those were so wonderful! |
Tulips77720 chapter 1 . 7/31/2016 It was heartbreakingly beautiful. Sorry I can't be more eloquent. Brains not working right now. |
banzi chapter 1 . 4/11/2016 Nice one. |
hermionerose1998 chapter 1 . 3/21/2016 I don't know how you do this - I've been following your fanfics for a few years now and rediscovered you last week. Every piece is so wonderful, and this is no exception. I don't know what it was - whether it be the dynamics of everyone getting happier after the War or something else but this really struck a chord with me - especially Hermione's nightmares. Well done. |
Mathiilde3 chapter 1 . 2/27/2016 I want to not be, I want to not feel. This was entirely too much and entirely too good! I am at uni intending to study, but this ended up being a lesson in how not to cry in public. This was absolutely beautiful, everything about it. I want to quote back just about every sentence to you, ‘cause they all made me feel things, and it was intensely. You know that thing your face does, the twitches, as you attempt not to cry? That is my face right now. Ron being with his other family and Ginny being alive and knowing what it means and George still being funny while still being sad and Bill making a family to make up for the silence and Ron saving Percy because they did alike (this one might be my favourite, but I could say that about all of them) and Charlie appreciating his family just because (loved the Arthur being the first Weasley comment) and then Fred being magnificent as always and just so many tears! You wrote this so beautiful I want to praise you for ages, I am seriously in love and moved by this. It was amazing, you mixed joy and heartache so beautifully, like yes they are all sad, but they are also happy, or they are all sad, but they are also happy. The trio joking about how Harry is going to buy them stuff to make up for the last seven years or George making Harry uncomfortable and running Ron’s knight in shining armour moment or Fred being Fred, it was all so fantastic! Seriously, kudos to you for this story, definitively a favourite. Mathilde |
em.catherine chapter 1 . 8/19/2015 This is such a beautiful piece, truly! I am not usually a huge fan of second person, but it really adds to this. The numbering is a nice touch. Makes me tear up each time I come back to it. |
Nerddtastic chapter 1 . 2/4/2015 This was perfect. I like how you simply used numbers to label each Weasley child. I especially loved Fred's little story. |
PersianCalliope chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 Crying. And I will probably cry whenever I think of this again. Amazing |
poetrywoman chapter 1 . 12/26/2014 Almost made me cry! |
jade23 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013 Holy crap this made me cry. I think Fred's part really hit me. Great job :) |
Remembertoturnonthelights chapter 1 . 8/20/2013 This was heartbreaking. I cries the whole way through it. I never did quite get over Fred's death, but your writing is beautiful and it was really, really moving to read this. All of the Weasleys had scars by the end of that war, and it was never going to be easy, but I loved the way you portrayed each of them, especially Fred and Percy, so thank you for writing this. It touched my heart. |
Graciexx chapter 1 . 5/12/2013 excuse me while i fdoyizhYOUFVBIDSNLAUHFZIUl;Nisgfbo eprwsjioyfsbdh... that was beautiful... and now i'm crying... |
AA121 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013 seriously - tears streaming down my face. so well done |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2013 This story is completely misleading. You should have some respect for your readers and label this as a trio romance. It's disgusting as an r/hr fan to click on this story and be assaulted with images of Hermione slobbering into Harry's crotch. If you want to write about them passing each other around, great, but be honest about it would you? |
kheldar12 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012 This is really beautiful! Normally something as short as this would be maddening, because I would want more, more detail, more exploration! But you managed to pack quite a lot of story into 3,682 words, so bravo! I especially like 'five.' It's such an excellent portrayal of post-Battle George - sad but still engaged, and I'm glad that in understanding his siblings and friends, and in finding humor in messing with them a bit, he finds closure. Really well done! |