Wow, this is really good. If you say this is your first like this, awesome job! That fight scene was done with great imagination. I had no problem with picturing it in my head. You did a wonderful job on this...masterpiece! Thanks! I must read on.

OMG asdfghkjl i love it so much so much happness and love best bleach yaoi fan fic ever

Awwwwww :3

Ichigo woke up! Finally! Poor Grimm had to go through so much without him, but now they can be together again. I really wanted Ichi to testify though... you can't get a more emotional testimony than a victim boyfriend who just woke up from a coma right?

Fight Grimmjow! Don't you let Ichigo lose you.

Ichi's waking up!

Grimm is finally up and kicking again! Awww. So cute ~

Ichigoooooo! Poor babies :( Renji better get messed up for this. I demand blood for this pointless hatred, and Ichi needs to do the honors... or Shiro. Take him out!

No, Ichigo! Somebody better mess Renji up. I demand blood for this useless hatred.

Holy crap! Grimmjow is the one with the secret past this time? I did not see that coming.

Ichigo, you finally get the chance for real romance. Is all Soul Society evil in this, or just the usual good guys? Ah, but Kenpachi is good. I hope Ichigo has some cool secret, that would just top this off.

You got my vote. Great start! Renji sure is an associate in this one though. Hope he gets a good beating for it ;)

Awesome.
It has everything and in the right amount.
And insanely happy at the addition of the Nissan GTR as it is my dream car.
However mine would be a 2014 gtr as i am writing this now in 2016...such a "fun" year.
ANYway, this is absolutely amazing, found it through blackstorm on deviantart and will read it many times

This was your first yaoi fanfic?! Well done! I very much loved it. :)

I almost cried a few times. It was so emotional and I loved it. Please right a nnoitra and shinji follow on