| Reviews for Indomitable Spirit |
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   Astropye chapter 9 . 11/21/2019 Please continue this! It's my favorite pokemon story on the entire site. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/23/2019 One of the best and most interesting fanfics i have ever read, please update soon |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/19/2018 This story is sooooo goood! I hope someday you finish it :) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/18/2018 That date was perfect, I can’t wait for them to find out that he’s actually ash. Btw love misty’s and pikachu’s conecction that’s something I’ve always liked about the anime that pikachu was especially close to her |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/18/2018 I really like this story |
| Conan.212 chapter 9 . 8/7/2018 Well this Giovanni is Ash Daddy thing isnt really a surprise-thats classic- but Delia as a Rocket? This is pretty intressting. |
| Conan.212 chapter 8 . 8/7/2018 Aww man Ash is back? ._. To be honest I dont like that,I prefer him in this story as Satoshi because he was so damned cool. Its a Shame that he got his memories back... |
| Conan.212 chapter 5 . 8/6/2018 Surfer-Pikachu reminds me on the yellow Pokemon edition:) |
| Conan.212 chapter 2 . 8/6/2018 Okay this story sounds really impressive and epic. This japanese touch makes it really good and its intressting that Ash has now such a sexappeal. Their are just some little wrote sometimes Satosi or Satosis and forget the h. |
| alwaystherights chapter 9 . 6/18/2017 omg this is an amazing story plz continue it |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/28/2017 I will be waiting for an update and supporting you all the way! Great story |
| FlightfootKeyseeker chapter 2 . 12/2/2016 Why don't they recognize Satoshi's voice now? They seemed to recognize it earlier. |
| PheonixFyre374 chapter 9 . 11/18/2016 Update please! |
| TheCRAZYAunt chapter 9 . 9/15/2016 I really love your story and everything you've done with it! I have it saved on my computer and I reread it a lot. I'm just curious though...are you EVER going to finish it? I need to know what happens next and how it ends. Please for the love of Arceus finish the story so I know! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/14/2016 Okay I have a couple problems with this fic. One, Ash is just so ludicrously over the top. It's terrible. It's like what I imagine a 12 year old would think is cool, like robo-dinosaurs with laser eyes or something equally cringey. Two, speaking of cringey: stop trying to shoehorn Japanese in. It's embarrassing and it makes you look like a loser and a terrible writer (when in reality you're pretty good). Yes, pokemon is Japanese in origin. We all know that. No, that doesn't mean you have to try and stuff little bits of weeaboo-ese in there. Just relax, take a chill pill, and write some good fanfiction. All that being said, this honestly seems really good to me. A bit cringey but not too terrible. Thumbs up, worth the read. |
