There are some minor errors ("Oh...then its about...?") but the interaction between Clark and Bruce was interesting, as was your choice of scenes.

poor bruce

Aww
This is so sad!

Awwww! I wanna hug Bruce!

Hahaha, naked Bruce walking around his house XDDDDDDDDDD

But anyways! I swear i was like the first to read this story cuz like the moment i got it in my e-mail i read it but couldn't review cuz i was on my phone '

Anyways! YES! SUPERBAT!

Love,

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.(...) LBK

I LOVE IT